Faith, Hope, Love
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Comment from rama devi
Very good contemplative poem with interesting rhyme scheme plus fine rhymes and slant rhymes as well as superb consonance of S plus soft C in the first stanza and P & V in the second. Sounds great read aloud. Good rhythmic groove.
Just one optional suggestion, for your consideration, to shift the first two rhymes from:
If dream perceives
And heart conceives
TO:
If dream conceives
And heart perceives
LOVE THIS LINE:
If wisdom trains
And faith sustains
This poem reveals to me that you have a keen sense of the music of words--which I love...looking forward to reading more from you! Welcome to FS.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
Very good contemplative poem with interesting rhyme scheme plus fine rhymes and slant rhymes as well as superb consonance of S plus soft C in the first stanza and P & V in the second. Sounds great read aloud. Good rhythmic groove.
Just one optional suggestion, for your consideration, to shift the first two rhymes from:
If dream perceives
And heart conceives
TO:
If dream conceives
And heart perceives
LOVE THIS LINE:
If wisdom trains
And faith sustains
This poem reveals to me that you have a keen sense of the music of words--which I love...looking forward to reading more from you! Welcome to FS.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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rd - thank you so much for the in-depth review. I'll consider your recommendation. I love words and the 'music' as you called it. Was a lonely child and spend all my free time reading Webster's Dictionary and Encyclopedia Brittainica (no kidding.)
God bless!
Relda
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That's a blessing! My family had those encyclopedias well--the whole set. Warm Smiles and God bless,
rd
Comment from William Ross
very good, faith, hope and love our mankind's trinity here on earth, if we have all of these the right path you are on. thanks for the share and have a good day.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
very good, faith, hope and love our mankind's trinity here on earth, if we have all of these the right path you are on. thanks for the share and have a good day.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hi William - good to talk to you again. I think the last time I was on FanStory was in May when I read your "Sisters" piece. Thank you for your review and kind comments. I'll get back in the groove and check in on your site to see what you're up to. - Relda
Comment from Irish Rain
How lovely and true. I'm so sorry he's passing, but never to be lost, as life never truly dies. I loved this, says so much, blessings....
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
How lovely and true. I'm so sorry he's passing, but never to be lost, as life never truly dies. I loved this, says so much, blessings....
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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So nice to meet you! Thanks for your encouragement. Bud is an amazing man - he's been cracking jokes all day and making plans to go see our son and family in OK City at Thanksgiving. If anyone is stubborn enough to do it, it's my Bud.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from l.raven
HI Relda, I am so happy to see you...missed ya...I am so sorry sweet girl ...I don't think age has anything to do with who we love...it's what we feel in hearts for each other...true live is forever....eternal...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo Luff
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
HI Relda, I am so happy to see you...missed ya...I am so sorry sweet girl ...I don't think age has anything to do with who we love...it's what we feel in hearts for each other...true live is forever....eternal...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo Luff
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Linda - thank you for your review and I've missed you too. So nice to share with folks who care. XXOO back at you. - Relda
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I hope your here to stay...and you are always sooooo welcome...xxoo love
Comment from robyn corum
Relda,
This is a special poem. I'm not quite sure of your meaning, but that's okay, because I think this poem can be interpreted several different ways. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
Relda,
This is a special poem. I'm not quite sure of your meaning, but that's okay, because I think this poem can be interpreted several different ways. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Robyn, so good to have your review and encouragement. As Bud and I face his ALS together, we reach new depths in faith, hope and love.
Wow, it's good to be back on FS!
Regards,
Relda
Comment from royowen
As some wise person once said, death is not final, just simply a new adventure, time is merely a journey, life a classroom for the future. Great piece of writing Relda, welcome back, I will pray for you, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
As some wise person once said, death is not final, just simply a new adventure, time is merely a journey, life a classroom for the future. Great piece of writing Relda, welcome back, I will pray for you, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks Roy. You always get me. I covet your encouragement, prayer, and blessing. - Relda
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Well done Relda
Comment from RoostyNester
A very sweet and fulfilling verse about what real love is. Nothing is stronger, and binds forever, as love does. Well done in style and verse. I loved your poem.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
A very sweet and fulfilling verse about what real love is. Nothing is stronger, and binds forever, as love does. Well done in style and verse. I loved your poem.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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RoostyNester - so nice to meet you. Thanks for your review and encouragement. I'll check out your site soon to see what you're up to. - Relda
Comment from Mustang Patty
Such a beautiful poem. Your author's notes made my heart ache. I'm sorry for the journey you and he are on. Your last sentence, "Our love persists, blessed by our changeless God," gives me the knowledge that you will be okay - sustained by your faith in Him.
The poem moves along nicely and the rhymes don't feel forced.
Thank you for sharing - my prayers are with you during this difficult time.
~patty~
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
Such a beautiful poem. Your author's notes made my heart ache. I'm sorry for the journey you and he are on. Your last sentence, "Our love persists, blessed by our changeless God," gives me the knowledge that you will be okay - sustained by your faith in Him.
The poem moves along nicely and the rhymes don't feel forced.
Thank you for sharing - my prayers are with you during this difficult time.
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Patty - thank you for your review and encouragement. We both covet your prayers.
And it is nice to meet you. I'll check in at your site and see what you're up to, soon.
Relda
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow? What a inspirational and memorable message in this gem! If only people would abide by your words, what a different society we will reside. This poem deserves wide recognition. Please consider sending it somewhere beyond Fanstory. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Did I say, I loved it?
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
Wow? What a inspirational and memorable message in this gem! If only people would abide by your words, what a different society we will reside. This poem deserves wide recognition. Please consider sending it somewhere beyond Fanstory. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Did I say, I loved it?
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Poetic Friend - I covet your comments and encouragement. I'm glad you liked it.
And, good to meet you. I'll check out your site soon to see what you're up to.
Relda
Comment from patcelaw
I was 57 when my husband died and he was 70. It has been a long 21 years since as a widow. May you have a wonder filled weekend, Patricia
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
I was 57 when my husband died and he was 70. It has been a long 21 years since as a widow. May you have a wonder filled weekend, Patricia
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Patricia - so good to hear from you. And a fresh dose of encouragement back at you. - Relda