To Last Forever
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Comment from MissMerri
No better word comes to mind than "gorgeous" to describe this poem. Of course it doesn't hurt that my most favorite part of any day is the sunrise. I love the feelings described in your words... the honesty and the sweetness, the freshness of a new day, full of promise and anticipation. What's not to love about these stirring thoughts and emotions? You manage to convey so much in a few well-placed words. Keep it up. You're soaring. ;")
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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No better word comes to mind than "gorgeous" to describe this poem. Of course it doesn't hurt that my most favorite part of any day is the sunrise. I love the feelings described in your words... the honesty and the sweetness, the freshness of a new day, full of promise and anticipation. What's not to love about these stirring thoughts and emotions? You manage to convey so much in a few well-placed words. Keep it up. You're soaring. ;")
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I feel...eww so pretty when ever your around...-smile...Hello Meadow......well far be it from me to argue with you...eww I feel so pretty....aha...thank you Dear...love you Michael
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I noticed the changes, and did feel it took away a slight distraction... No longer does a reader stop and wonder what eww means... He can simply get lost in the beautiful poem. You're funny, Michael. Do you know that? I see your humor everywhere.
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yes Maam...I'm your huckleberry...-wink-
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi
A very good video to go with the poem, I had to read it twice, I found beautiful poetry "morning voluptuous". I really liked the new born baby reference
startling promise born first
brightness addresses you just like gorgeous
does everything up all brand new baby
Well done Mary
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Hi
A very good video to go with the poem, I had to read it twice, I found beautiful poetry "morning voluptuous". I really liked the new born baby reference
startling promise born first
brightness addresses you just like gorgeous
does everything up all brand new baby
Well done Mary
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
Comment from djsaxon
Do the corn-fed mamas understand where you are coming from? I think not. I revel in your beauty o the page. Fave bit... LOL
stripped naked God honest
every breath no less love
pours out nectar honey sweet
love bro - DJ
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Do the corn-fed mamas understand where you are coming from? I think not. I revel in your beauty o the page. Fave bit... LOL
stripped naked God honest
every breath no less love
pours out nectar honey sweet
love bro - DJ
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
Comment from MizKat
Hi Michael,
Your poem was beautiful and I loved it. You did a good job in writing it and it was interesting to read. I didn't look up the other stuff because more than likely I wouldn't understand it anyway. I'm getting very forgetful in my old age.
Kat
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Hi Michael,
Your poem was beautiful and I loved it. You did a good job in writing it and it was interesting to read. I didn't look up the other stuff because more than likely I wouldn't understand it anyway. I'm getting very forgetful in my old age.
Kat
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
Comment from ronnie k
You take life very serios and that's great, in rereading and reading I could this was life within nature but your write gave a childs birth.Thank you
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You take life very serios and that's great, in rereading and reading I could this was life within nature but your write gave a childs birth.Thank you
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
Comment from tarynlk
This poem gave me all the feels! Every word you chose made your poem that much stronger. You are a very talented writer! Keep up the good work!
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This poem gave me all the feels! Every word you chose made your poem that much stronger. You are a very talented writer! Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
Comment from barleygirl
I'm not very good at interpreting this type of poetry, so I understood a little over half of what you're saying here. But I do recognize good word-crafting even when I'm not following every word. My favorite part is that it sounds original, using many unusual vivid descriptions.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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I'm not very good at interpreting this type of poetry, so I understood a little over half of what you're saying here. But I do recognize good word-crafting even when I'm not following every word. My favorite part is that it sounds original, using many unusual vivid descriptions.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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no one is...-smile-...but when you've woken up into the bright life...and everything is just alright...pretty. including you. when you break it down to its common factor...its always her who makes you feel...see so damn gorgeous....but who cares really when you wake to a sky so wide. love Michael
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Thank you for adding a bit to my understanding of what inspires your writing. I'm not in a position to be fully cognizant of such inspiration ("it's always her/him who makes you feel & see so damn gorgeous") but I do have my other uplifting aspects of life! *smile* I'm glad you have such love & joy in your life!
Comment from foxangie123
You are probably sick of me telling you what a great poet you are but I am. I had never heard that band either and I LOVE them. How perfect this all fits. I wish I had six to give you. I wish I had ten, a zillion really. It's worth it.
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You are probably sick of me telling you what a great poet you are but I am. I had never heard that band either and I LOVE them. How perfect this all fits. I wish I had six to give you. I wish I had ten, a zillion really. It's worth it.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael, this has such wonderful phrases in it. I pondered what a voluptuous morning would be...it just seemed to open up the day full and sunny in my mind.
Lovely to read this and see where you take your readers.
Thanks for sharing.
m
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Dear Michael, this has such wonderful phrases in it. I pondered what a voluptuous morning would be...it just seemed to open up the day full and sunny in my mind.
Lovely to read this and see where you take your readers.
Thanks for sharing.
m
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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a voluptuous morning is everyone that finds you...in love.
with me....-smile- you make me feel so damn pretty...-headwag-...love you Michael
Comment from Joan E.
Thank for the video to reinforce the image you depicted--a "morning voluptuous". I really liked the comparison to a "firstborn" baby. Cheers- Joan
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thank for the video to reinforce the image you depicted--a "morning voluptuous". I really liked the comparison to a "firstborn" baby. Cheers- Joan
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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thank you Shoan...for the inspa....ration is shared. love you Michael
