To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Morning"Poems by Michael
21 total reviews
Comment from Oatmeal
reconciled,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
The descriptive words are well chosen. I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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reconciled,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
The descriptive words are well chosen. I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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-smile-....-headnod-...love you too...Michael
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes, Michael, I've seen the morning like that and it's everything you say. I remember standing in the corn fields at the end of my grandmother's garden and it was just like that picture of yours. With breeze moving the corn, like waves in the sea, the sun coming up on the horizon. What a lovely poem, my dear friend, a joy to read and a perfect Michael poem. Love you lots, my dear friend. xx Sandy.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Yes, Michael, I've seen the morning like that and it's everything you say. I remember standing in the corn fields at the end of my grandmother's garden and it was just like that picture of yours. With breeze moving the corn, like waves in the sea, the sun coming up on the horizon. What a lovely poem, my dear friend, a joy to read and a perfect Michael poem. Love you lots, my dear friend. xx Sandy.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Hi....-smile-
new everyday just born.
like the light up in the eyes of who you love every time she sees you.
sunrises like that you're in heaven. missed you Sandy, hope youve been well.....love you Michael
Comment from Javed05
this poem is really good about Mornings. I found it engaging for the reader and it flows smoothly .language used is great that creates good imagery in the reader's mind thanks for sharing with us .....
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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this poem is really good about Mornings. I found it engaging for the reader and it flows smoothly .language used is great that creates good imagery in the reader's mind thanks for sharing with us .....
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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well alright....-smile- my pleasure. love Michael
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I'm not a morning person so I'd rather watch the sunset than the sunrise. When we go camping we usually wake with the birds and stuff so we usually catch part of it then but that's only when we're camping. Great job and enjoy a sunrise for me, k?
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I'm not a morning person so I'd rather watch the sunset than the sunrise. When we go camping we usually wake with the birds and stuff so we usually catch part of it then but that's only when we're camping. Great job and enjoy a sunrise for me, k?
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
Comment from Lena Borghi
Yes, the break of day is pretty awesome and the hummingbird's hovering mighty marvelous. What a skill! Like dragonflies.
Thoughtful, sensitive piece with great imagery. Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.
Best,
Lena
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Yes, the break of day is pretty awesome and the hummingbird's hovering mighty marvelous. What a skill! Like dragonflies.
Thoughtful, sensitive piece with great imagery. Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.
Best,
Lena
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
Comment from jusylee72
such a pretty poem about the best part of the day , The sunrise, when we can choose to make it a good day. I loved many of your words. Stripped naked , god honest was very descriptive. Can't forget that one. Congratulations on a great read.
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such a pretty poem about the best part of the day , The sunrise, when we can choose to make it a good day. I loved many of your words. Stripped naked , god honest was very descriptive. Can't forget that one. Congratulations on a great read.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
Comment from Bill O'Bier
I have always been delighted at the prospect of a new day, a fresh try, one more start, with perhaps a bit of magic waiting somewhere behind the morning. Thanks for sharing this fine piece. Cheers and the best to you my dear friend.
Warm regards,
Bill~
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I have always been delighted at the prospect of a new day, a fresh try, one more start, with perhaps a bit of magic waiting somewhere behind the morning. Thanks for sharing this fine piece. Cheers and the best to you my dear friend.
Warm regards,
Bill~
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
Comment from robyn corum
I have to be honest and tell you that it drives me crazy that I can't understand your poetry. It makes me feel so dumb and like such a failure. I usually just pass it by, but this time I thought -- no, no, those are words I understand...
But when you string them together like that, I'm lost. Please help me to see the light...? Help?
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I have to be honest and tell you that it drives me crazy that I can't understand your poetry. It makes me feel so dumb and like such a failure. I usually just pass it by, but this time I thought -- no, no, those are words I understand...
But when you string them together like that, I'm lost. Please help me to see the light...? Help?
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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-smile-...hey Robyn.
hm....lets see...ah my writing is about feeling more than anything.
like a wide awake morning you once embraced uninhibited by exactness of what or why...you felt so alive. you just reveled in abandoned reason. one....-smile-
two...its about somebody who takes on sunrise every time you see yourself in their eyes...gorgeous.
third. I test myself now....I just sit and find a song that lets me sink....and I say create that feeling Michael...see...? -smile-...love Michael
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okay. I'm trying hard. Maybe next time.
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you never know...-smile-
Comment from royowen
The beauty of the new day heralds the new mercies are also born with it, the old has been put away, the new is embraced and revelled in! Hope is amazingly born on the morning and the darkness goes. Beautifully written phrases written in that theme, Michael, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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The beauty of the new day heralds the new mercies are also born with it, the old has been put away, the new is embraced and revelled in! Hope is amazingly born on the morning and the darkness goes. Beautifully written phrases written in that theme, Michael, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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and the Lord God said let there be light, and there was...the first dawn. Hey Roy...-smile-...I love the Living Word of God. its the Book....ive ever read that has and continues to suprise me...condemn me and raise me back to life. to this day there uncertain times and scripture that literally send electric current pulsating through my body. or thats the best way I can describe it. I have friend...a best friend who urges me toward finding a new home in church...I had ah very bad experience...well plural is truth, at one I attend for many years. do you remember the account of them who had caught a women having sex out of wedlock...and they whom would trap Jesus bring her to Him and say this is her sin, the law says it requires exactness...what do You say. I often wondered what He wrote in that sand. that dropped stones from hands and sent such a strong message they turned and walked away in silence.
some people still chose to throw the stones. its hard to love Steven. Appreciate the kind words sir. love Michael
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Jesus never condemned a soul, and nor do I, He banished all sin, it remains only if one doesn't want forgiveness, and refuses to forgive, God hates self righteousness, well done, Michael, you are loved,
Comment from LIJ Red
And when the morning sun fell on her face, the boy chewed off his arm she was lying on to escape without waking her. Nothing changes the looks of things like the coming of the sun. Excellent imagery.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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And when the morning sun fell on her face, the boy chewed off his arm she was lying on to escape without waking her. Nothing changes the looks of things like the coming of the sun. Excellent imagery.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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only if you fall in love under a Budwieser light....aha...well it was it was beautiful while the crickets sang...huh... love Michael
