Mister, O Mister
Some times you just have to reach out and touch somebody27 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Brett, Nice work and the lyrics should work to a catchy piece of Country Music. I could hear Dolly singing this. One comment why not write another verse and then have Chorus,verse, chorus, verse ,chorus , (verse) then finish with the chorus. Other than my suggestion good song. Cheers Christine
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Hi Brett, Nice work and the lyrics should work to a catchy piece of Country Music. I could hear Dolly singing this. One comment why not write another verse and then have Chorus,verse, chorus, verse ,chorus , (verse) then finish with the chorus. Other than my suggestion good song. Cheers Christine
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
You have written a very nice song and I really enjoyed reading it. As I was reading it the melody was kind of in my brain which was very nice too. You are wonderful at writing songs. At one time I was writing them too.
Kat
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Hi Brett,
You have written a very nice song and I really enjoyed reading it. As I was reading it the melody was kind of in my brain which was very nice too. You are wonderful at writing songs. At one time I was writing them too.
Kat
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Thanks Brett. Kat
Comment from Pantygynt
Another fine country and western style lyric from a master's pen. The theme of
"help me make it through the night" is a common enough motif that I have heard somewhere in other songs. It certainly has a ring to it and lends purpose to an otherwise casual affair.
Good to have you back with us again, Brett.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Another fine country and western style lyric from a master's pen. The theme of
"help me make it through the night" is a common enough motif that I have heard somewhere in other songs. It certainly has a ring to it and lends purpose to an otherwise casual affair.
Good to have you back with us again, Brett.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Comment from barkingdog
This is a sad, but so often true, song about a brokenhearted woman on the rebound looking for someone to set her free from the memories of a man who left her.
She's yours for a dance. Mister, O Mister.
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This is a sad, but so often true, song about a brokenhearted woman on the rebound looking for someone to set her free from the memories of a man who left her.
She's yours for a dance. Mister, O Mister.
:) e
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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Comment from mkflood
yep I can hear a tune while reading this. make a song, and ill create an illustrated music video to go with your storyline and music. course I can offer some ideas with ya to let ya write it. I suck in English as a kid but as a illustrator I can draw the story. I want to thank you for selecting my work. the whole story is cool and I can only imagine how the music is gonna be and cant wait. oh btw if ya get the chance go to YouTube.com and search for name mkflood and there is about 14 illustrated music videos that I have done as for an example on my earlier suggestion. its an honor to have my work included with yours. great job on the story and thanks again.. mkflood
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yep I can hear a tune while reading this. make a song, and ill create an illustrated music video to go with your storyline and music. course I can offer some ideas with ya to let ya write it. I suck in English as a kid but as a illustrator I can draw the story. I want to thank you for selecting my work. the whole story is cool and I can only imagine how the music is gonna be and cant wait. oh btw if ya get the chance go to YouTube.com and search for name mkflood and there is about 14 illustrated music videos that I have done as for an example on my earlier suggestion. its an honor to have my work included with yours. great job on the story and thanks again.. mkflood
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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Comment from misscookie
Well that reads like a hit to me
I love the words to your song
and the story line is sounds real
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Well that reads like a hit to me
I love the words to your song
and the story line is sounds real
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Thanks misscookie!
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
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Peace God be with you.
Cookie
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I like the recurring: Mister, O Mister, take me in your arms and hold me tight, then the changes within each stanza leading off of that. The artwork lends well to the content, as she adds more fire to her flame.
I like it, Brett, and my pick for the singer is Jana Kramer!
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I like the recurring: Mister, O Mister, take me in your arms and hold me tight, then the changes within each stanza leading off of that. The artwork lends well to the content, as she adds more fire to her flame.
I like it, Brett, and my pick for the singer is Jana Kramer!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Brett, this should be an excellent country song! I can't sing a lick, but I tried and in my voice this caught and held my attention. I can think of who I would like to sing this! Two come to mind, Alan Jackson and Luke Bryan, I feel have the perfect voice ranges between them. Only my feelings because I listen to and love country music!
I wish you well with this really great song of her heartbreak and trying to get a man to get her to forget! I always wanted to compose country music lyrics, but never knew how!
Have a great day Brett my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
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Brett, this should be an excellent country song! I can't sing a lick, but I tried and in my voice this caught and held my attention. I can think of who I would like to sing this! Two come to mind, Alan Jackson and Luke Bryan, I feel have the perfect voice ranges between them. Only my feelings because I listen to and love country music!
I wish you well with this really great song of her heartbreak and trying to get a man to get her to forget! I always wanted to compose country music lyrics, but never knew how!
Have a great day Brett my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
Excellent song lyrics. I will be expecting to hear it on the radio. It's sure to make the top ten. I'm sure it will be a hit, maybe even a cross-over.
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Excellent song lyrics. I will be expecting to hear it on the radio. It's sure to make the top ten. I'm sure it will be a hit, maybe even a cross-over.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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Comment from BeasPeas
This is well written with good flow and rhyming. I realize this piece is meant to be song lyrics. It would do well as a country song. Illustration, as you say, is perfect accompaniment. Marilyn
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This is well written with good flow and rhyming. I realize this piece is meant to be song lyrics. It would do well as a country song. Illustration, as you say, is perfect accompaniment. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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