Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Yes it certainly will reveal all. This is really a great piece and most unique as well. That is a really neat mask in the picture. Excellent.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016

Thank you so much! I'm afraid it's not to everyone's taste, but I do live intrigue.

reply by foxangie123 on 30-Oct-2016

It was good.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A great image and good presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the questions you ask,
as well as the connection
between lines one and two.
-The last line is very good,
and poses a very interesting question--
-What is behind that mask?
-A strong entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you so much!

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Oct-2016

You are very welcome!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Excellent questions in the poem
that are quite intriguing and match the picture well
and an excellent presentation
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you so much!

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

good. mystery IS intriguing. At the beginning.
certainly preferable to an open book.
Hiding true self-becoming another-exciting. For a time.
Pretense keeps it interesting?
Poem shows adventurous spirit.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you!