Are You Made of Cheese?
A little girl talks to the moon.21 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
What a cute poem - a delight for bedtime reading. I liked the 2 rhyming lines, followed by a third with a different ending. I see you are a really good author, but I have say this......" my friends say make a wish is dumb" I would change to 'my friends say TO make a wish is dumb ' It is a lovely choice of a relevant picture and I love the background color.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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What a cute poem - a delight for bedtime reading. I liked the 2 rhyming lines, followed by a third with a different ending. I see you are a really good author, but I have say this......" my friends say make a wish is dumb" I would change to 'my friends say TO make a wish is dumb ' It is a lovely choice of a relevant picture and I love the background color.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your lovely comments and the stars! I left "to" out because it threw off the meter. I also try to keep it like a child would say.
I'm so happy you liked this. Thank you for the compliment. 8-)
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
The man in the moon is a very special childhood memory for me--a favorite uncle showing me the facial features as a very young child on our driveway. This was so special in reviving that memory. Great rhyming and loved the image you chose. Bookcasing this one!!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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The man in the moon is a very special childhood memory for me--a favorite uncle showing me the facial features as a very young child on our driveway. This was so special in reviving that memory. Great rhyming and loved the image you chose. Bookcasing this one!!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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How sweet of you! Thank you. I've always been able to see the face in the moon. Through the years, I've been amazed at the people who can't.
I'm very flattered that you bookcased this. Makes me feel so special. 8-)
(Don't tell anyone, but I still look for the man in the moon, and I still say "star light, etc..)
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As do I...always thinking of my uncle when I do too!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Yvonne,
This is a delightful rhyming poem and ode to the moon.
Very sweet coming from the voice of a young one.
I like cheese, but I doubt Mr. Moon is made from it;)
"and Daddy tells me where is Mars"
I see that above line as 'and Daddy tell me where Mars is'
No?
Very nice my friend,
Linda
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Yvonne,
This is a delightful rhyming poem and ode to the moon.
Very sweet coming from the voice of a young one.
I like cheese, but I doubt Mr. Moon is made from it;)
"and Daddy tells me where is Mars"
I see that above line as 'and Daddy tell me where Mars is'
No?
Very nice my friend,
Linda
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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No. LOL.
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. 8-)
Comment from l.raven
HI Yvonne, this is sooooo sweet you...you know on a full moon...you can make a wish...I love your story told...please don't be made of cheese...so very nicely written sweet girl...and I love your colors and your picture...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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HI Yvonne, this is sooooo sweet you...you know on a full moon...you can make a wish...I love your story told...please don't be made of cheese...so very nicely written sweet girl...and I love your colors and your picture...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8-)
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always Yvonne welcome...xxoo love
Comment from zanya
A glimpse into the magical and wonderful world of childhood where the world and the heavenly bodies inspire dreams 'beautiful moonbeams'
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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A glimpse into the magical and wonderful world of childhood where the world and the heavenly bodies inspire dreams 'beautiful moonbeams'
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Thank you. 8-)
Comment from Susanjohn
AWWWW... so cute!!!!! but i live in Wisconsin....so of course he's made of cheese!! hahahah great job on this..truly enjoyed reading!! :-)))
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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AWWWW... so cute!!!!! but i live in Wisconsin....so of course he's made of cheese!! hahahah great job on this..truly enjoyed reading!! :-)))
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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That must be where the rumor started. LOL.
Thank you for such a cute and happy review. Makes me feel good just reading your remarks. 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem about the moon. The little girl is clever to know the moon cannot be made of cheese. She looks out for him every night in the dark he shines his moonbeams.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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A very well-written fun poem about the moon. The little girl is clever to know the moon cannot be made of cheese. She looks out for him every night in the dark he shines his moonbeams.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Thank you. I appreciate your review. 8-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I loved everything about this poem, Yvonne. First the rhyming is superb, it has a sing-song effect that children will love, and the words about the moon and the little girl talking to him, is so endearing. I think many children look at the moon at night and see that face, I still love to look at him. (definitely the 'man' in the moon) The question, it's funny how we are all brought up being told the moon is made of cheese, LOL. I like how you have brought in the stars and named Mars, which you can see clearly most nights. A really lovely picture and presentation put's this poem in the 6 star bracket, easily! A pleasure to read, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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I loved everything about this poem, Yvonne. First the rhyming is superb, it has a sing-song effect that children will love, and the words about the moon and the little girl talking to him, is so endearing. I think many children look at the moon at night and see that face, I still love to look at him. (definitely the 'man' in the moon) The question, it's funny how we are all brought up being told the moon is made of cheese, LOL. I like how you have brought in the stars and named Mars, which you can see clearly most nights. A really lovely picture and presentation put's this poem in the 6 star bracket, easily! A pleasure to read, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Oh, how generous!!!! I'm so thrilled. Coming from you, this is such a compliment. Thank you so much! 8-)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What a cute little poem. Kids would love this one. I wonder how that rumor about the cheese moon got started. Now I have to look it up or it's gonna drive me nuts. LOL!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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What a cute little poem. Kids would love this one. I wonder how that rumor about the cheese moon got started. Now I have to look it up or it's gonna drive me nuts. LOL!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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I think because it looked like Swiss cheese. That's just a guess.
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it. 8-)
Comment from heyjude
Yvonne, awesome how sweet. The moon is indeed gorgeous to look at and certainly not made of cheese. More parents should take their children outside to look up at the moon. I enjoyed this one very.much.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Yvonne, awesome how sweet. The moon is indeed gorgeous to look at and certainly not made of cheese. More parents should take their children outside to look up at the moon. I enjoyed this one very.much.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Thank you. I'm glad. 8-)
