Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

MJ,

I enjoyed your palindrome entry. The topic works nicely as you have described it. Good job with its form. The art/image is perfect.

Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thanks so much, Jan.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done Maria, is this your first palindrome? You've done an excellent job on this I love the theme a good voice, excellent free verse my friend, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Yes, it's the first one, Roy. Is it that obvious? ;)
Thanks for reading.
Take care.

reply by royowen on 19-Oct-2016

There's a lot of firsts today, you did well Maria

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This is a fine palindrome. I love your use of movement, reminding me of Degas' paintings of ballerinas. Your poem is also vivid as I can see the dancers. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

That's funny. I was thinking of Degas when I wrote this!
Thanks for reading.