A Haunting Tale
A late Picture Challenge22 total reviews
Comment from Nika2016
And then I woke
Twas just a dream....
Very scary stuff, Christine..
This should be on television...Twilight Zone..fare...
Nice writing..my favorite old house story.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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And then I woke
Twas just a dream....
Very scary stuff, Christine..
This should be on television...Twilight Zone..fare...
Nice writing..my favorite old house story.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi Nika2016 Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem I am so appreciative of your comments especially for you to say it was your favourite one xx Just some fun from my imagination and I love these challenges Cheers my friend Christine😃
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Hi Nika2016 Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem I am so appreciative of your comments especially for you to say it was your favourite one xx Just some fun from my imagination and I love these challenges Cheers my friend Christine😃
Comment from RoostyNester
A wonderful picture challenge. It was clever with humor to boot. Showed great style with words and had a surprised ending. I loved your funny, humorous poem. Well done.
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A wonderful picture challenge. It was clever with humor to boot. Showed great style with words and had a surprised ending. I loved your funny, humorous poem. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi RoostyNester. Thanks you with all my heart for your lovely review and six stars for this. I do so enjoy writing and these challenges are fun to stretch ones imagination and I am so pleased to receive your review and Thanks you once again for your great support of my work. Cheers my friend Christine😃😃
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Hi RoostyNester. Thanks you with all my heart for your lovely review and six stars for this. I do so enjoy writing and these challenges are fun to stretch ones imagination and I am so pleased to receive your review and Thanks you once again for your great support of my work. Cheers my friend Christine😃😃
Comment from misscookie
I'm not worry you were late.
I thought this story you wrote was great.
You had my attention from the first to the last line.
Thank you for sharing
I'm sure by now you read mine.
Cookie
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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I'm not worry you were late.
I thought this story you wrote was great.
You had my attention from the first to the last line.
Thank you for sharing
I'm sure by now you read mine.
Cookie
Comment Written 17-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi Cookie Thank you dear friend for your six stars and lovely comments for my challenge poem and I will sure look up yours and read it My apologies for being late and not with the others but life sometimes gets in the way of my favourite hobby and one does love to write I wish I could make it my job LOL Cheers to you Christinexx 😃😃
Comment from Jackarrie
Brilliant, love it, a great read, I enjoyed it from start to finish. It is a pity you are late for the contest, it would have been a great contender.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Brilliant, love it, a great read, I enjoyed it from start to finish. It is a pity you are late for the contest, it would have been a great contender.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 17-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi Mary, Glad you liked this and I have had a frw say it should have been in the contest but it was just a poem for this picture challenge and I am a bit late getting it out but am so happy you thought it worthy. I will just have to write another for the next contest Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Christine
= I love your story for the selection. Excellent!
= The beauty of not having strict posting rules, it gives you the freedom to post when you can.
= Makes if more fun, and not like a job. (*<*)
= Since you used partial punctuation with quotes, was it your intention? I noticed a lot of missing commas, periods, and uppercase after speech tags.
= No matter, great job, my friend.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings ... Jax
<> Published as ... Jacqueline M Franklin
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi, Christine
= I love your story for the selection. Excellent!
= The beauty of not having strict posting rules, it gives you the freedom to post when you can.
= Makes if more fun, and not like a job. (*<*)
= Since you used partial punctuation with quotes, was it your intention? I noticed a lot of missing commas, periods, and uppercase after speech tags.
= No matter, great job, my friend.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings ... Jax
<> Published as ... Jacqueline M Franklin
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi Jackie. Thanks so much for your comments and I never know when to put in the correct punctuation etc so I will google up a site of grammar to check this out, but had fun with this image and hope you forgive my errors. By the way you are always welcome to my house LOL Cheers Christine😃
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=Thank you.
= Not to worry, I'll do an edit for you tomorrow, so you'll know what to look for. Eezy-peezy. (*<*)
= Need to get to bed now--I have after midnight.
= Tomorrow, I have workers coming at 6:30 a.m.! Whew!
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Thanks Jackie sweet dreams
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I did a correction with some notes on a word doc, so check your email. (*<*)
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Hi Jackie. just checking in now and found your message. I have made some corrections so I hope they correlate with yours. and thank you so much for taking the time to help me with these I will check my email right away. you are are dear. Cheers Christine
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You are very welcome. Once you go through the edit in my email, I'm sure you'll make many more changes. (*<*)
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Hi Jackie.. I hpoe you received my email and have made the corrections as suggested and learnt so much from your great
edit so my sincerest thank you. Cheers my friend Christine😀😀😄
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Looks much better. (*<*)
I made some corrections, so check your email.
Comment from Teri7
This kept me on my toes the whole time I was reading and reviewing it. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. A very good job. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
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This kept me on my toes the whole time I was reading and reviewing it. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. A very good job. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Hi Teri Thanks so much for your review and I am glad it kept your interest. I had fun thinking up this story and it just happened. Come in for a cup of tea any day LOL Cheers Christine😃
Comment from elloramen
The rhyme and rhythm is very good, but there are a couple of lines that sound awkward in order to fit the rhythm. "And then I said 'I must away' and thanked them for the lovely day." Overall the imagery and narration makes this a fun read.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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The rhyme and rhythm is very good, but there are a couple of lines that sound awkward in order to fit the rhythm. "And then I said 'I must away' and thanked them for the lovely day." Overall the imagery and narration makes this a fun read.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Hi elloramen Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem and for your feedback I have changed this line so I hope it reads more smoothly now, appreciate your comments and it was fun to think up Cheers Christine
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Comment from bob cullen
Very good. Loved the rhyme and meter. And it told a really good story.
The poem flowed nicely and I must confess, while reading it I wondered how it would end
The ending was cleverly crafted. And I didn't see it coming but it really was appropriate
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Very good. Loved the rhyme and meter. And it told a really good story.
The poem flowed nicely and I must confess, while reading it I wondered how it would end
The ending was cleverly crafted. And I didn't see it coming but it really was appropriate
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Hi Bob, thanks for stopping by my house for a read LOL I am glad you thought it a good story I never know how my poems will begin or end with these picture challenge images. Ha Ha glad you didn't see until the end I was hoping for this .Many Cheers enjoy your day Cheers Christine
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great poem with a shock at the end. I didn't see that one coming. Too bad you missed the contest. I think you would have won with this one.
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A great poem with a shock at the end. I didn't see that one coming. Too bad you missed the contest. I think you would have won with this one.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Hi Thomas. Thanks for your great review and I didn't know about the contest and this was really a late entry for the last challenge so its a bit late but I am so pleased for your review and for you confidence I will have to try and write one for the contest LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from DonandVicki
A very interesting and imaginative poetic story with a grand twist at the end. Very well written and inspiring tale. I think the art work complements your poem perfectly.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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A very interesting and imaginative poetic story with a grand twist at the end. Very well written and inspiring tale. I think the art work complements your poem perfectly.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Hi Donand Vicki. I am pleased you thought this imaginative and well written. I had fun thinking up this twist and thank you very much for stopping by my house you are always welcome Cheers Christine
