Your Special Ways
Kyrielle Sonnet45 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
Quite a passionate kyrielle sonnet aimed at some lucky guy with those special ways. Meter and rhyme well maintained throughout. A very pleasant piece of work. Jus one typo noted below.
"My urging's heat persuades you..." Apostrophe needed where I have placed it.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Quite a passionate kyrielle sonnet aimed at some lucky guy with those special ways. Meter and rhyme well maintained throughout. A very pleasant piece of work. Jus one typo noted below.
"My urging's heat persuades you..." Apostrophe needed where I have placed it.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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You are getting very good at sending the love! :-))) Thank you for reading and the review!!! I fixed that word...good eye! :-)
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Mwah!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I'm going to put my name on this and give it to my wife. Just kidding she'd know it wasn't mine. I can't write poetry. My stuff sounds like limericks.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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I'm going to put my name on this and give it to my wife. Just kidding she'd know it wasn't mine. I can't write poetry. My stuff sounds like limericks.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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hahaha Thomas you are funny!! I say you try!!!...maybe you can say..you've been studying up or something heheh idk..thanks for reading this...I truly appreciate you taking the time!! have a great day
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
writes like this will make you famous how beautiful it was to read WOW! I hope i can read more of your writing very enjoyable
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writes like this will make you famous how beautiful it was to read WOW! I hope i can read more of your writing very enjoyable
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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OH Abby thank you for the wonderful review and 6 stars!!! I am happy you enjoyed this little poem of mine!!!
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, this is an incredibly beautiful and very poignant Kyrielle Sonnet! Your words has such thought provoking intimacy of deep rooted feelings! How those feelings for him render you hopelessly wanton of him and his essence! Well done my friend!
One misspelled word in the last line of quatrain, the word should be *your* not *you*.
Have a great day my friend,,,,,,, Jimmy
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Susan, this is an incredibly beautiful and very poignant Kyrielle Sonnet! Your words has such thought provoking intimacy of deep rooted feelings! How those feelings for him render you hopelessly wanton of him and his essence! Well done my friend!
One misspelled word in the last line of quatrain, the word should be *your* not *you*.
Have a great day my friend,,,,,,, Jimmy
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Jim!!! what can i say...you are such a good friend!
Comment from winnona
A beautifully written sonnet. The words flow easily together combining and forming a unique rhythm of their own. They continue to flow and combine to form the message of the poem for the reader.
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A beautifully written sonnet. The words flow easily together combining and forming a unique rhythm of their own. They continue to flow and combine to form the message of the poem for the reader.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review!! glad you enjoyed this poem of mine!!
