Your Special Ways
Kyrielle Sonnet45 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent sonnet of love and passion's tale of a special time.
Your words melted together to make an absolutely fantastic love piece.
Very well done
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Excellent sonnet of love and passion's tale of a special time.
Your words melted together to make an absolutely fantastic love piece.
Very well done
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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OH Thank you Barb!!...what a wonderful review..so appreciate it!!
Comment from sandy montgomery
I like the style you chose here it suits your subject well. Your imagery was beautiful and moving. Quite nice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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I like the style you chose here it suits your subject well. Your imagery was beautiful and moving. Quite nice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Hi Sandy!!! thank you so much for reading and the wonderful review!! always appreciate!!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have done. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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This is a very well written poem you have done. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Teri dear!! thank you so much!! I always appreciate you!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle Sonnet. The special way we embrace our lovers and they to us, will always bring back memories and make our hearts beat faster.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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A very well-written Kyrielle Sonnet. The special way we embrace our lovers and they to us, will always bring back memories and make our hearts beat faster.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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thank you dear Sandra!!! always appreciate your reviews!!! take care
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows lust and love. There is longing to be together with someone one might love.
The artwork is fanciful and romantic.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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This shows lust and love. There is longing to be together with someone one might love.
The artwork is fanciful and romantic.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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:-) love and lust!!! heheh thanks for reading and the review!! much appreciated!!!
Comment from foxangie123
This is so very beautiful at every single end and realm. It is so lovely to be inspired by anothers work and that is exactly what this did. It as well adds to the reader great hope.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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This is so very beautiful at every single end and realm. It is so lovely to be inspired by anothers work and that is exactly what this did. It as well adds to the reader great hope.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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oh your back!!! You have been on my mind and in my prayers!!!I truly hope things are well with you. hugs dear!!! ( thanks for reading and the wonderful review!!)
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My husband died. I'm so lost. Happy to read you sweetie.
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My heart just breaks to hear this news...I am truly sorry. You may be a bit lost right now...but not alone. Should your ever need a friend..to yell, scream, complain or whatever...you just send me a pm. We can yell at the heavens together. big giant hug...sending your way.
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Thank you so much doll. Xo.🌺
Comment from DR DIP
That is absolutely beautifully written Susan and i mean that sincerely. It is the ultimate love poem it has beautiful words and metaphors and exquisite rhyming. Awesomely done
Bloody hell I thought it was about me for a second then realized fk I'm not THAT nice hahaha (worthy of 6 stars if I had one left)
Don't ever tell me you can't write love poems
xxdip
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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That is absolutely beautifully written Susan and i mean that sincerely. It is the ultimate love poem it has beautiful words and metaphors and exquisite rhyming. Awesomely done
Bloody hell I thought it was about me for a second then realized fk I'm not THAT nice hahaha (worthy of 6 stars if I had one left)
Don't ever tell me you can't write love poems
xxdip
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Hi Dipster...you are that nice!! I bug you everyday,,and we are still friends! I'm so happy you like this...I seem to have fallen in love with the Sonnet!!....thanks for the awesome review and all the encouragement. truly do appreciate you!
Comment from Richard J
Simply gorgeous, Susan ... whew!
Wondrously alluring to the senses, you've penned the perfect iambic beat to match the heart's yearning song, ache's sensual dream, and life's primal urge for close affection.
Whomever the gloriously blessed guy is you penned this poem of enthrallment to (if he's read this) must surely have every fiber of his being kneeling in blissful gratitude, planning a romantic interlude for you both to share.
I love it ... color, font, presentation, illustration, creativity, emotive force, power, and tenderness, etc; all combine to embrace and sweep the spirit vividly into your moment, as excellent poetry should. I am more amazed and impressed by your growing skills with each of your compositions I'm privileged to read.
Thank you, Susan, for such an incomparably joyous treat! ~ Richard
(to preserve mind-eye continuity and keep the warm flow intact, use single spaces between verses)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Simply gorgeous, Susan ... whew!
Wondrously alluring to the senses, you've penned the perfect iambic beat to match the heart's yearning song, ache's sensual dream, and life's primal urge for close affection.
Whomever the gloriously blessed guy is you penned this poem of enthrallment to (if he's read this) must surely have every fiber of his being kneeling in blissful gratitude, planning a romantic interlude for you both to share.
I love it ... color, font, presentation, illustration, creativity, emotive force, power, and tenderness, etc; all combine to embrace and sweep the spirit vividly into your moment, as excellent poetry should. I am more amazed and impressed by your growing skills with each of your compositions I'm privileged to read.
Thank you, Susan, for such an incomparably joyous treat! ~ Richard
(to preserve mind-eye continuity and keep the warm flow intact, use single spaces between verses)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Richard, you have such a way of reviewing!! I am so pleased you enjoyed this piece!
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Thanks for the nice compliment, Susan ... glad I was able to please you.
Comment from WalkerMan
Absolutely beautiful! As a Kyrielle Sonnet, it is flawless, and better than most sonnets of any kind I have seen. As a discreet but passionate love poem, it has to set the one addressed on fire. This one is "for the ages" and ought to be published. Superb and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Absolutely beautiful! As a Kyrielle Sonnet, it is flawless, and better than most sonnets of any kind I have seen. As a discreet but passionate love poem, it has to set the one addressed on fire. This one is "for the ages" and ought to be published. Superb and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Thank you Mike for this wonderful review. I'm smiling because i know you truly mean every word.
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You're most welcome, Susan. Yes, this is a splendid Kyrielle sonnet, and your writing is getting better and better. I read the other reviews so far, and it's clear you are conveying the emotion in it very effectively. -- Mike
Comment from Dean Kuch
"My silent heartbeat..." Sounds kind'a eerie to me, Susan. For if a heartbeat is silenced it usually means that it is no longer beating.
In other words... you're dead.
However this lovely, lyrical Kyrielle sonnet isn't cold and devoid of warmth at all as the dead are.
No, this is warm and poignantly passionate.
We'll call it an anomaly and leave it at that...
Well done, poet.
~Dean
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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"My silent heartbeat..." Sounds kind'a eerie to me, Susan. For if a heartbeat is silenced it usually means that it is no longer beating.
In other words... you're dead.
However this lovely, lyrical Kyrielle sonnet isn't cold and devoid of warmth at all as the dead are.
No, this is warm and poignantly passionate.
We'll call it an anomaly and leave it at that...
Well done, poet.
~Dean
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
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Susan LOL...not Sandra....and silent....doesn't mean dead...it hasNOT been silenced...just maybe needs someone special to hear it.
:-p thanks deano
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Did I write "Sandra"?
Oh my...I could have sworn...
I apologize, Susan, and I have no other excuse to give for my slip-up besides age, LOL.
The mind is usually the first thing to go they tell me.
In all sincerity, it's a lovely Kyrielle sonnet.
~Dean :|
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No worries Deano. :-)
