Comment from Amber Fatone

Excellent

This is really great. It flows so naturally, each line bleeding into the next, it has a humble ands gentle atmosphere. The art goes well with it too. All stars, you posses great talent, good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review Amber.This was a tricky one to keep track of the syllables and rhymes. I like the idea of loved ones coming back to us in our dreams. Cheers, j

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Seriously this is one of the most beautiful works of art I have ever read. Goodness gracious the sense of freedom and peace you bestow. Top of the line.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review foxie, I like the idea of loved ones coming back to us in our dreams. I hope that you are doing okay and have some loving support surrounding you. You have many friends here that care about you. Wish you peace, love and clarity. Cheers, j

reply by foxangie123 on 13-Oct-2016

Thank you. I have nobody left here. It is so hard. Hugs🤗

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016

aww, I want to give you a hug. I will say a little prayer for you tonight. Peace, judester

reply by foxangie123 on 13-Oct-2016

Thank you friend🌞

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016

I am here, bless you, judy

reply by foxangie123 on 13-Oct-2016

Thanks so much.