So glad to be alive
A Rondeau redouble21 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the first line too the last.
I'm very much be-hide. please forgive me.
this is a very touching story.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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You captured my attention from the first line too the last.
I'm very much be-hide. please forgive me.
this is a very touching story.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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Hi Cookie I am glad your like this from the start and I had fun wtiting this and tried to be a bit philosophical and glad you enjoyed this Cheers my friend for reading and reviewing 😃 Christine
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You're very welcome, have a blessed weekend.
Cookie
Comment from DR DIP
That is beautifully written Chrissy well done nice photo accompanying it.
A rondeau redouble? i don't know the rules but you seemed have succeeded in keeping within the parameters.
dip
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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That is beautifully written Chrissy well done nice photo accompanying it.
A rondeau redouble? i don't know the rules but you seemed have succeeded in keeping within the parameters.
dip
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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Hi dip. Thanks for reading and reviewing my rondeau redouble. first attempt and it was fun to try something new and I am very pleased you thought it well done and yes I liked this image and thought it would do OK with my words, Many Cheers to your Christine😃
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I find this to be an excellent rondeau redouble and the repeating lines are strong enough to give emphasis to the stanzas using them.
Very well done
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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I find this to be an excellent rondeau redouble and the repeating lines are strong enough to give emphasis to the stanzas using them.
Very well done
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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Thank you very much Barb for your reviewxand encouraging comments. I am sp pleased your thought this excellent Many Thanks and have a great day Cheers Christine😃
Comment from judester
A clever poem on faith, strength and gratitude. "Because I have awoken with insight..... just trust that everything will be alright" are powerful thoughts that can change a situation instantly. Just having those positive motivators, instead of dwelling in the negative, is the first step to conquering those barriers. Cheers, judester.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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A clever poem on faith, strength and gratitude. "Because I have awoken with insight..... just trust that everything will be alright" are powerful thoughts that can change a situation instantly. Just having those positive motivators, instead of dwelling in the negative, is the first step to conquering those barriers. Cheers, judester.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Hi Judester. Thank very much for reading this and for your positive review and yes insight is a wonderful thing I always try to stay positive and happy Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Gloria ....
Your entire presentation is magical, Christine. Clearly you are an artist of not only the written word, but also visuals.
Excellent message in your rondeau redouble. To be glad to be alive is exactly the right attitude.
You could never tell from this beauty that this was your first, so all the best to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Your entire presentation is magical, Christine. Clearly you are an artist of not only the written word, but also visuals.
Excellent message in your rondeau redouble. To be glad to be alive is exactly the right attitude.
You could never tell from this beauty that this was your first, so all the best to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Hi Gloria. Many thanks for your lovely words for my rondeau it was a good all day challenge but enjoyable and I love to do different styles . I am very happy to be alive and grateful for all the wonderful things in life including the many FS friends I have and the great support from you all. This brings me so much enjoyment and fun very addictive bit worth it. Cheers to you Gloria for your lovely feedback 😀😄
Comment from pharp
Christine,
I admire you and you are to be commended for the penning of this beautiful Rondeau Redoublé. I recall the penning of my first Rondeau, it was indeed a challenge but I made it through. When I saw the Rondeau Redouble prompt come up, I didn't give it a second chance. I have since penned another Rondeau, just don't have the confidence to release it. You are very talented my friend, I enjoyed the read from the beginning to the ending. Excellent rhyming and meter and message. Each and every day we must give thanks and be glad to be alive. Blessings my friend and the very best to you in the contest.. Portia
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Christine,
I admire you and you are to be commended for the penning of this beautiful Rondeau Redoublé. I recall the penning of my first Rondeau, it was indeed a challenge but I made it through. When I saw the Rondeau Redouble prompt come up, I didn't give it a second chance. I have since penned another Rondeau, just don't have the confidence to release it. You are very talented my friend, I enjoyed the read from the beginning to the ending. Excellent rhyming and meter and message. Each and every day we must give thanks and be glad to be alive. Blessings my friend and the very best to you in the contest.. Portia
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Hi Portia, Oh you must release you next one, you have such a lovely talent so please share it. Thanks so much for your feedback for this one and I am indeed cery happy to be alive and have such a wonderful life with great family and friends and such stunning support form my FS friends like you I do so appreciate you all and it has been so lovely to meet you Portia. Thank you and a big Cheers to you Christinex😀
Comment from heyjude
Chrissy, sorry I'm not that familiar with the Rondea Redouble, but
I like the thoughts here. I like your repeating line ... Today I am
so glad to be alive. Those fears can make us miserable, so it's good
to just trust that God will help us through.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Chrissy, sorry I'm not that familiar with the Rondea Redouble, but
I like the thoughts here. I like your repeating line ... Today I am
so glad to be alive. Those fears can make us miserable, so it's good
to just trust that God will help us through.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Hi Jude, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my rondeau redouble. it was a challenge to do and I am pleased for your lovely comments. Cheers Christine😀
Comment from William Ross
Nicely done on the rondeau redouble on so glad to be alive, the rhyming , meter and flow are all great. good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Nicely done on the rondeau redouble on so glad to be alive, the rhyming , meter and flow are all great. good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Hi William, Thanks for saying so re my rondeau redouble, I thought I wpuld give it a try and appreciate your feedback Cheers Christine😃
Comment from RoostyNester
A very nice rondeau redouble poem. Your poem was well done in style and verse. The desired to beat the odds, was inspiring. Very nice poem.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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A very nice rondeau redouble poem. Your poem was well done in style and verse. The desired to beat the odds, was inspiring. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Hi RoostyNester, I appreciate your feedback and for saying it was well sone as my first attempt this makes me happy and I hope my message was clear life is really great. Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Irish Rain
Amen. This is a BEAUTIFUL entry for this contest! Aren't you glad you entered? I like your topic, nothing greater than thanksgiving, just for being alive. Because it implies thanksgiving for everything. Awesome entry! Blessings Miss Christine!!!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Amen. This is a BEAUTIFUL entry for this contest! Aren't you glad you entered? I like your topic, nothing greater than thanksgiving, just for being alive. Because it implies thanksgiving for everything. Awesome entry! Blessings Miss Christine!!!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Hi Irish Rain , Thanks for the push into this realm and yes it was fun to have a go and your lovely feedback is so much appreciated. I am glad you thought it good enough for the contest, but I like yours so good luck to you and a big Cheers sending your way CHEERS Christine 😃
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Kudos to both of us, we're already winners for taking on this challenge!!!
