Bittersweet Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Bittersweet Revenge"She's back ready for revenge.
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Comment from oliver818
This is a great story. Quite creepy and dark but still really good and well writte . Thanks so much for sharing and have yourself a really great day!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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This is a great story. Quite creepy and dark but still really good and well writte . Thanks so much for sharing and have yourself a really great day!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind review. It means a lot knowing someone likes my work. You have a great day too. Happy reading, take care.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very fast paced interesting story. A couple of snags,
the vicious [beats] are still circling the car. S/B beasts.
and near the end, [ahold] instead of [a hold].
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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A very fast paced interesting story. A couple of snags,
the vicious [beats] are still circling the car. S/B beasts.
and near the end, [ahold] instead of [a hold].
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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Thank you for the great rating and the helpful comments. I went back and corrected those mistakes. Thank you again. Happy Reading, Take care.
