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Leveraged Buyouts & The Bartering

Potlatch Challenge-Letter to the Editor

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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I like ..... "he makes money not growin' things. The more he doesn't grow, the more he makes." Tragic but funny or vice versa.

You have an interesting prose assignment. What made you choose, Caleb Brookstone? You make some good points. I guess if farmers listen to the crazy government we would all go hungry. Thank God for calebs.


Great job, sweetie pie, luv ya.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

Comment from Pearl Edwards
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This letter makes me think if my Grandparents were chucked into our world today, they would be thinking the same as Caleb
I particularly like his conversation with today's farmer, that was well put.Great letter mikey,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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Years ago people work for what they need to survive and was perfectly happy just to have the necessary and keep working to feed their families. Today we work to pay our debts, the more we have the more we want and seldom anyone have a happy face, they worry to keep their possessions safe, and lost their own souls.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

Comment from country ranch writer
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bartering can be done if one hand washes the other in times of need and not greed everyone should work together and succeed with their future needs

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

Comment from nordicgirl
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Now this is something new from you. I like it a lot! It really does some real and I would not guess you wrote this. That IS what you are giing for, yes? You get your message across strongly!! NG

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for sharing another great job of writing. I could actually see the person I thought was writing this piece, and it was spot on from type, pictures, to the words of what it says. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

Comment from LIJ Red
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I think your sawmiller would be interested in the people trying to make a living shafting other people with a laptop. This is an excellent letter entry.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Very good, Mikey. I especially like the part about being paid NOT to grow anything. Sick, sick, sick. Our govt is sick in the head. :)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a well written response to the potlatch prompt, mikey. This reminds me of Iowa's Senator Grassley who makes over a million dollars a year for NOT farming his land and then voted against food stamps for the poor. I get angry every time I think about it. How do these jerks get elected over and over ... Anyway, a good write, my friend~Debbie

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

Comment from damommy
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Can you imagine how some like Caleb would feel if he found himself in the present time. Well, yes, I guess you can. You just wrote great letter to the editor from him.

I'm with Caleb. I laugh at the idea of getting paid to grow nothing. Never made sense.

This was very enjoyable to read. 8-)

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016