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Yes Dear

A bit of fun

15 total reviews 
Comment from LaRosa
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Yes, Dear! Love your humor; but gotta tell you the truth,
Us Ladies say the same thing about you guys...anyone out there?

So. Now I know why Neil Armstrong really went to the moon. More dangerous here than there? :)

"...even when you're sure she's wrong, it will turn out she's right." My hubby used to say the same thing about himself!

" There's always Aussie beer" Must be pretty great stuff.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
    La Rosa, it's so nice to receive a review on an older post. I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece of nonsense. Thank you again
reply by LaRosa on 07-Feb-2017
    ;)
Comment from Mary Wakeford
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Oh my goodness, Bob, I'm here to return a review and I chose this one to get you ever closer to the 'recognized' ribbon. I howled at the humour within and the hilarity of the various images you have conjured up...this one might possibly be a favourite, but there are truly so many...

And if one day you find out
She has finally got it wrong
Might be best to take a trip
To the moon like Neil Armstrong

A bit of fun in your subtitle should be changed to a whole lot of fun!!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
    Thank you Mary. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it and got a laugh out of it. Comments like yours provide the best reward a writer can receive
Comment from Jay Squires
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A funny poem, Bob, and so true. But I've met your lovely bride. This couldn't be her you are caterwauling about! LOL, give here my best. She took good care of you while you were recuperating. You still in good health?

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    Jay, you are so right. She is very special. And she did look after me wonderfully well.
    Actually she inspired the poem. The grandkids love her to death but they also know not to push Nan.
    Thanks for the nice reply
Comment from BChan412
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I really enjoyed the flow of your poem, and I'm still laughing it's hilarious! And one quick note, I concur "Yes Dear" will always work. Excellent! Best wishes.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    Thank you for reading and reviewing my thought for the week. My wife does all the thinking around here, I'm allowed fifteen minutes every Friday. Just joking.
    Delighted to know you enjoyed it
reply by BChan412 on 30-Sep-2016
    You're welcome...still laughing! :-)
Comment from frogbook
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Ah, worthy of a six and one of the few weeks I have run out! Excellent-I laughed out loud in a couple parts-I think it reminded me of me LOL. Great rhymes and excellent rhythm to go with a healthy belly laugh!!!!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    Your reviews are always kind. I'm so glad you share my sense of humour. Thank you for reading
Comment from winnona
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Very well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I would suggest is a darker word color and maybe a shade darker yellow. It is just a little too bright and the words hard to read. Otherwise very well done!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    Among other things I failed colour co-ordination at school. When you wrote 'a little too bright' I thought you were referring to my intellect!!!
reply by winnona on 01-Oct-2016
    No. I am so sorry I meant the color background and color of your words. They made it hard for me to read it. I would never have made any comment to offend you. I am sorry that I wasn't clearer.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2016
    I took no offence. Your comment was spot on.
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Bob. You sure have this right. Yes dear is the standard for keeping the homefires burning, isn't it? LOL

Even when they are dead wrong, best let them think they are right.
This sums it up in your words here:

"Try and soothe her wounded pride
But do it with gentle care>"

Bravo! Good poetry, Bob (and fun) Bob

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    Sounds like our wives may be related. Thank you as always for taking the time to read and review my poem. And also for the lovely comment you wrote in response to my review of your last posting
reply by Mastery on 30-Sep-2016
    :) Bob to Bob
Comment from royowen
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Sounds like discretion is the best part of valour, I think women like to think the best of their men, and allow themselves to allow it. Men are very good at telling women what they want to hear! Love this poem Bob, you've done extra well, with some good rhyme, rhythm. It's in abcb with a smooth, readable narrative, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    I think cowardice is more appropriate than valour.
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Roy
reply by royowen on 30-Sep-2016
    Heh heh like that Bob
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written philosophy poem. It seems that someone learned the lesson for a happy marriage very well. My house rule is; the mother of this house is always right, and if she is wrong, she is still right.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    My wife went to the same school. Glad you enjoyed it. I would however call it survival rather than philosophical.
    Love how your pencil writes the little message.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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The key to the happiest relationship is always "Yes dear" no matter what the situation may be.

Poem depicts this them well and to the point.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
    Thank you Brett. I appreciate you reading and reviewing 'Yes Dear.'