Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this as it is well written and very creative. Your descriptive passages are captivating. The story being told from the bear's perspective is really engaging and held my attention from beginning to end. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016

Thank you. There is a lot more to come in this story. Zeke eventually becomes a rogue grizzly destroying anyone or anything he can. I haven't figured it all out yet, but I will.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

I noticed the description right away. You certainly set the stage for those of us reading. I liked, as well, the way you summarized at the bottom for those of us just reading. Good luck with your class!
Rhonda

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016

Thank you. I am looking for any suggestions on this writing. Did it seem okay to you?

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 27-Sep-2016

Yes, it was a very nice piece!