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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "The Lady is Enticing!"poems from Picture This Challenge
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
I couldn't believe that you were writing such a poem. I should have known what you were up to. Makes me wonder about MY mind. LOL Maybe it's because of what we read on here every day?
Very cute and funny Sandra. Well done. xox Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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I couldn't believe that you were writing such a poem. I should have known what you were up to. Makes me wonder about MY mind. LOL Maybe it's because of what we read on here every day?
Very cute and funny Sandra. Well done. xox Nancy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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You and all the others too, LOL, and they say that the Fanstorians are saintly people, LOL!!!! Thanks Nancy, I am having such a giggle with all the reviews, you are all so funny. Just say 10 hail Mary's and you will be let off. LOL (I'm not Catholic, so hope I got that bit right! ) :) xsx Sandra x
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I'm Baptist so I have to say; take two aspirin and call me in the morning. HAHAHA. Oh wait that's what Dr's say. Sorry
Comment from rspoet
Ah, the old apple pie switcheroo
Sounds a little crusty to me
but a Gala event to be sure
as old Granny Smith is a little green around the edges
And a bit of a tart
the sweet smell of Ambrosia
promises a Golden Delight
and is well worth the price
All faces will be red
for in the end it really is Delicious
As is this poem with its beautiful art work
Well done
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Ah, the old apple pie switcheroo
Sounds a little crusty to me
but a Gala event to be sure
as old Granny Smith is a little green around the edges
And a bit of a tart
the sweet smell of Ambrosia
promises a Golden Delight
and is well worth the price
All faces will be red
for in the end it really is Delicious
As is this poem with its beautiful art work
Well done
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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OH, I nearly choked on my bag of crisps! LOL, that was so funny! Thank you, Robert for that, it's hilarious. Oh, just so you know, I make the best apple pie in our village, but I don't wear gold. :))) Thanks my friend. :) ~Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Oh, I love your 'bit of fun' for the picture.ð???
-When I first started reading, I didn't know where it was going.
-You ended with a great surprise!
-Good rhyme, imagery, and story, as well as progression in it.
-I like all the images about how she is beguiling and enticing; the men willing to pay a fee!
-But the best is:
"Another door then opens freeing smells they can't deny
And now they're drooling for their slice of home-made apple pie!"
-That must have been some apple pie!
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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-Oh, I love your 'bit of fun' for the picture.ð???
-When I first started reading, I didn't know where it was going.
-You ended with a great surprise!
-Good rhyme, imagery, and story, as well as progression in it.
-I like all the images about how she is beguiling and enticing; the men willing to pay a fee!
-But the best is:
"Another door then opens freeing smells they can't deny
And now they're drooling for their slice of home-made apple pie!"
-That must have been some apple pie!
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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You've never tasted my apple pie, Pam, it's something else, I can tell you! LOL. Thank you so much, my friend, I had such a giggle writing it, and now I'm having a bigger giggle reading the reviews. I think some should wash their minds out, lol, I just don't know how they got it so wrong. :) Sandra xx
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Well, Sandra, you have never tasted my homemade apple pie, all from scratch, including crust🙂 I don't know how anyone could get it wrong. You are welcome for the review.
Comment from frogbook
Love it-quite the excellent surprise for everyone's evil little minds-haha. I'm sure this will be the winner for originality. Great idea.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Love it-quite the excellent surprise for everyone's evil little minds-haha. I'm sure this will be the winner for originality. Great idea.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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I think the reviews are funnier, they all got it so wrong, I don't know how, lol! Thank you, my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it too. :) Sandra xx
Comment from winnona
This is a very creative, imaginative picture this challenge poem. I think you did very well completing the challenge with the poem. Your words were well chosen and the piece was very well thought out.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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This is a very creative, imaginative picture this challenge poem. I think you did very well completing the challenge with the poem. Your words were well chosen and the piece was very well thought out.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Winnona, for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Lady of the night as caterer! Now there's a turn up for the book as they say. You lead us delightedly and delightfully up the garden path and into ... the ktichen! "Yikes" as they say in the comic strips.
A thought here.
"And eagerly await the pleasures they've been waiting for". "Await" and "wait" in the same line? Perhaps "searching for" in the second instance.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Lady of the night as caterer! Now there's a turn up for the book as they say. You lead us delightedly and delightfully up the garden path and into ... the ktichen! "Yikes" as they say in the comic strips.
A thought here.
"And eagerly await the pleasures they've been waiting for". "Await" and "wait" in the same line? Perhaps "searching for" in the second instance.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Jim, I never noticed that, I'll go and change it now. Thanks my friend! Goes to show what some of those ladies of the night are capable of! LOL. Glad you liked it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from oliver818
What a great poem. You created a very sensual
Image and then contrasted it with a wonderful twist- apple pie. Not what most readers expected I imagine. Thanks a lot for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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What a great poem. You created a very sensual
Image and then contrasted it with a wonderful twist- apple pie. Not what most readers expected I imagine. Thanks a lot for sharing
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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No, none of my reviewers thought it was the apple pie the men wanted -- can't understand it! LOL. Thank you, Oliver for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed my bit of fun. :) Sandra xx
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, if only every bakery served up such creamy delicacies.
You've captured this lady.
And lady she is. Only hypocrites would suggest otherwise.
What she offers, she offers with distinction.
What she charges, the market is happy to pay.
What she delivers . . . well, I'll never tell.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Ah, if only every bakery served up such creamy delicacies.
You've captured this lady.
And lady she is. Only hypocrites would suggest otherwise.
What she offers, she offers with distinction.
What she charges, the market is happy to pay.
What she delivers . . . well, I'll never tell.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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LOL! You wouldn't believe how many thought this was something other that apple pie the lady was offering! I am shocked! LOL. I make a mean apple pie, Lee, you might like to try it one day. I'm told it's the best pie around! Thank you, my dear friend, for the lovely 6 stars. You're a star yourself. Big hugs. :) Sandra. xxx
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Well, I know something about apple pie. It's best warm, and full of cinnamon. I like to plant my face right in the middle. You can't take me anywhere. L
Comment from patcelaw
Not only did I like it, it was a pleasure to read and was written well. The twist at the end makes for a very humorous read. Blessings for a good week. Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Not only did I like it, it was a pleasure to read and was written well. The twist at the end makes for a very humorous read. Blessings for a good week. Patricia
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Patricia! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. You have a lovely week too! :) Sandra xx
Comment from CEO2020
Exceptional in my opinion...worthy of 6 and not 5 because of the way you led the reader into convincing them she was a hooker or stripper, then at the end made a very enjoyable twist. Very Nice!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Exceptional in my opinion...worthy of 6 and not 5 because of the way you led the reader into convincing them she was a hooker or stripper, then at the end made a very enjoyable twist. Very Nice!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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aww, Thank you so very much, for the lovely 6 stars, and more thank yous for the lovely review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my little bit of fun at the end. Bless you! :) Sandra xxx
