Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend. Good syllable count. The presentation is lovely and the presentation is stunning. I like your haiku. It's my favorite kind of poetry.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016

Hey you, this one is true, I do have a well worn blue hammock, empty this summer though, sniff. I told my mom I will back home in 227 sleeps. ha ha zzzzz. Thanks for the review Gypsy, buddha bless, j

Comment from Stephanie Burster

Good

I like this piece. The simplicity of a hammock between two trees, the beginning of summer. A new season. Who will lay upon it? What history does it bear? I like that this poem can stretch forward to anywhere

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review. I love a relaxing hammock, cheers, j

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Nice farewell to summer as we prepare for cooler weather. Nice imagery. Sentimental wording - well worn hammock. Flowed well. Should do well in the 5-7-5 contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, I love a hammock and a sunny afternoon, cheers, j