Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Johngie, like you...the same problem...the Winters up North...the salt eats them up with rust...I wanted to try and keep mine...but she is getting tired...and that is when I said I would let her rest...so sad...love your poem...and a great car...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thank you so much Linda :}

reply by l.raven on 25-Sep-2016

you are so very welcome Johngie...xxoo Love Linda

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good three line poem you have penned. Pretty car in the picture you used. I happen to love blue, red and black cars! Good luck in the contest. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thank you Teri

reply by Teri7 on 24-Sep-2016

you are so welcome

Comment from prettybluebirds

Exceptional

Exceptional. Hi, Angie. Good work, love the picture. Is that really your car? I didn't realize you had the car for that long. Good luck in the contest. Love, Auntie

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thanks Aunt Ruth. Pete and I spent a few hours looking at cars. Still looking online til john comes home. Love you

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

A great little poem that fits the required syllable count. It's very evocative; who can forget the first car they owned?

I enjoyed reading this. Nicely done. Good luck with the competition :-)

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thank you.

Comment from RodG

Good

Your poem definitely will resonate with anyone on FanStory who remembers the joy of buying their first car. Mine was also red and had a stick shift, but was NOT good to me. Good description except for the word "mine" which is confusing.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thank you Rod.

I changed the word "mine" to prized. I think it fits better.