Nature's Angst
Cinquain19 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
WOW! this is powerful and so well voiced in spite of having two lines starting with OF, which is not ideal. The enjambment between lines is important for the swift pacing and impacting closing line. Bravo. Fine alliteration of H. Just one spag:
Homo
Sapien(')s heart
Good luck in the contest.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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WOW! this is powerful and so well voiced in spite of having two lines starting with OF, which is not ideal. The enjambment between lines is important for the swift pacing and impacting closing line. Bravo. Fine alliteration of H. Just one spag:
Homo
Sapien(')s heart
Good luck in the contest.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Oh yes you are so right about 'of' -ooops !!!Yes I looked up that spelling and it doesn't require an ' since that is the singular form - difficult to find an answer to this spag even with vast resources of internet at our disposal ""zanya
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Oops!~ I did not know it was singular. You're right! Duh! :)
Blessings, rd
Comment from nancyjam
Good Cinquain with a strong
message about the destruction
of mother nature.
I still believe there is hope she can
recover.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Good Cinquain with a strong
message about the destruction
of mother nature.
I still believe there is hope she can
recover.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Great review zanya
Comment from LIJ Red
I am not an authority on poetic form, especially the shorter ones. I can look for message, assonance, alliteration, and syllable count, and if all seems right, like this one, I call it excellent.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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I am not an authority on poetic form, especially the shorter ones. I can look for message, assonance, alliteration, and syllable count, and if all seems right, like this one, I call it excellent.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Great review zanya
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this great little poem. It's short but contains an important message about humanitys relationship with nature. Thanks for sharing and good luck for the contest
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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I enjoyed this great little poem. It's short but contains an important message about humanitys relationship with nature. Thanks for sharing and good luck for the contest
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Kingsland
We are destroying the lifeblood of this Earth that nurtures and feeds us all. This short poem say a lot about the true nature of man's neglect. This was a well-written verse that has a very good message in it. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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We are destroying the lifeblood of this Earth that nurtures and feeds us all. This short poem say a lot about the true nature of man's neglect. This was a well-written verse that has a very good message in it. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading and engaging with this little poem zanya
Comment from William Ross
very good on the cinquain, homo sapiens heart, I like that, no we do not realize what we are doing like any child. Nicely done, good luck on this and have a great day,
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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very good on the cinquain, homo sapiens heart, I like that, no we do not realize what we are doing like any child. Nicely done, good luck on this and have a great day,
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Good contest entry. Hope you do well. I've given up on contests. The voting seems to be based on who has the most friends.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Good contest entry. Hope you do well. I've given up on contests. The voting seems to be based on who has the most friends.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Yes interesting comment zanya
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Your brief words are expressive and the arrangement with the artwork fits well. Thanks for sharing this piece. Good luck in this contest.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Your brief words are expressive and the arrangement with the artwork fits well. Thanks for sharing this piece. Good luck in this contest.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Nika2016
She is not dying...She has staying power long after we have gone...ask dinosaurs...
but the tiny poem has
a message and is
appealing.
nice
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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She is not dying...She has staying power long after we have gone...ask dinosaurs...
but the tiny poem has
a message and is
appealing.
nice
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Bollie
This is a very clever and profound poem about the destruction of our beautiful planet. The photo is PERFECT for bringing the message alive. Overall a really nice presentation. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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This is a very clever and profound poem about the destruction of our beautiful planet. The photo is PERFECT for bringing the message alive. Overall a really nice presentation. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya
