Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

This is a howl! Totally unexpected ending. Love that the cars turned around to get a second look. I felt the force of the wind even more when I learned of its talent. LOL

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thank you for your review. I still have nightmares about that ride! LOL

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Funny. One thing to look at: "unbuttoned my blouse with all those tiny buttons that was now flapping in that same demonic wind." This is a little confusing. I wasn't sure if the buttons were flapping or the blouse.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016

Thank you, I see what you mean. It is a bit confusing and I should have caught that. Thank you for your feedback and your review. And I think the whole thing including those awful little buttons was flapping in the breeze! LOL

Comment from wilkswrites

Good

Your story was really cute. I bet you felt marvelous with the wind blowing on you despite your predicament. Great story! Especially to pass down to your children and grand children as one of the funny ones.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016

Thank you, I won't soon forget that! LOL

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

hahaha, very good, yeah I bet that was a bit embarrassing. good write well presented and written. Good Luck on this and have a wonderful dat

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016

Thank you for your very nice review. I must tell you I am STILL traumatized to this day. LOL

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Wow now that is embarassing. I hate that feeling when you realise people are laughing at you, not with you.

One spag- You forgot to put a capital letter on the g of "Get out here."
Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016

Thank you for your excellent review and thank you for the heads up. I will definitely change that.