Pumpkins Ablaze
5/7/5 The Beauty of Autumn Contest16 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
WHat a great little poem. Very sweet and fun. I like the image of a pumpkin blazing, very original. Thanks for sharing , best of luck for the contest and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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WHat a great little poem. Very sweet and fun. I like the image of a pumpkin blazing, very original. Thanks for sharing , best of luck for the contest and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 21-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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I love the word "original" in this review, as that is what I was striving for. Thank you so much for your time
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A very good entry for the competition. I love the imagery and the choice of striking colours both in word and presentation is very well realised. A good strong piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Hi there,
A very good entry for the competition. I love the imagery and the choice of striking colours both in word and presentation is very well realised. A good strong piece.
GMG
Comment Written 21-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review this little poem of mine
Comment from krys123
Hello Val;
-with your collectively well-written alliteration that sparks the beauty of your imagery that is very descriptive and expressively definitive throughout the writing you've established the beauty of autumn's gifts. The pumpkins autumn moon's glow
and the very well known and festive landscape of autumn's color.
-All written in a 5/7/5 syllabic format which fits the contest requirements.
-May you have great reviews that catapult your poem to the top of the list in the contest.
-May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Hello Val;
-with your collectively well-written alliteration that sparks the beauty of your imagery that is very descriptive and expressively definitive throughout the writing you've established the beauty of autumn's gifts. The pumpkins autumn moon's glow
and the very well known and festive landscape of autumn's color.
-All written in a 5/7/5 syllabic format which fits the contest requirements.
-May you have great reviews that catapult your poem to the top of the list in the contest.
-May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 21-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Great review, Alex, as always. I always appreciate the amount of time and thought you put into your reviewing, and I'm happy you like this one.
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I did like it Val you are very welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from robyn corum
Val,
Wow! I love the image this brings to my mind! All those big round plump pumpkins shining brightly by the light of the big round plump moon! *smile* What a lovely picture! Thanks! And goooood luck!
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Val,
Wow! I love the image this brings to my mind! All those big round plump pumpkins shining brightly by the light of the big round plump moon! *smile* What a lovely picture! Thanks! And goooood luck!
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Robyn, I always appreciate your reviews.
Comment from damommy
Beautiful!
Very well worded for this contest. Great description of pumpkins in the moonlight.
Good luck in the contest. 8-)
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Beautiful!
Very well worded for this contest. Great description of pumpkins in the moonlight.
Good luck in the contest. 8-)
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to review this little poem
Comment from zanya
Yes it's an exquisite word picture - a snapshot of the Autumn of the year in all its golden glory complete with alliteration and appropriate verb 'blaze',- a hint of sun's warmth
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Yes it's an exquisite word picture - a snapshot of the Autumn of the year in all its golden glory complete with alliteration and appropriate verb 'blaze',- a hint of sun's warmth
Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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What a delight to wake up to this "exceptional"! I really appreciate the fact that you mentioned alliteration and verb usage, as that is really a big part of small poems. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
