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Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Sand Waiting Too Long for the Sea"possible selections for inclusion in book project
5 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
This is gorgeous, one of your very best and alsi one you snick right by me. Why????? ,well, this is what I look for when I search for your writing, total free form YOU. no one writes likecthis but you and I dig this most. NG
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2016
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This is gorgeous, one of your very best and alsi one you snick right by me. Why????? ,well, this is what I look for when I search for your writing, total free form YOU. no one writes likecthis but you and I dig this most. NG
Comment Written 08-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2016
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Awwww. I like this too. Most of the people here don't know what I'm talking about, so why bother? I'm glad you found it though and enjoyed it. This is the style I prefer, me and my fan. LOL michael
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a top quality poem, Mav. Your best free verse I've ever read. There's a most pleasant undertone of wistful humour combined with what appears to be a vision and certainly not marijuana induced, but one that comes from being in the desert. Like the Temptation of Christ who fasted there for forty days and forty days. I guess that indicates what time he began.
The Tree of Knowledge clearly runs with the Latin and algebraic equations. Education can never be anything more than a waste, right? ;-)
Fine, fine job and a most worthy effort for consideration of POM.
Exceptional all the way,
Ange
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This is a top quality poem, Mav. Your best free verse I've ever read. There's a most pleasant undertone of wistful humour combined with what appears to be a vision and certainly not marijuana induced, but one that comes from being in the desert. Like the Temptation of Christ who fasted there for forty days and forty days. I guess that indicates what time he began.
The Tree of Knowledge clearly runs with the Latin and algebraic equations. Education can never be anything more than a waste, right? ;-)
Fine, fine job and a most worthy effort for consideration of POM.
Exceptional all the way,
Ange
Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't know how much or little of your poem that I actually understood your true meanings, but I felt like I was following along pretty well, and it left me in deep thought about a few things. To an untrained eye and ear who knows nothing about meter and all the different forms, it's most times more refreshing and touching for me to read a person's thoughts and feelings than calculated da dum de dum dums. Great job. :-)
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I don't know how much or little of your poem that I actually understood your true meanings, but I felt like I was following along pretty well, and it left me in deep thought about a few things. To an untrained eye and ear who knows nothing about meter and all the different forms, it's most times more refreshing and touching for me to read a person's thoughts and feelings than calculated da dum de dum dums. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Wow, mikey!! This is absolutely awesome work. Best free-verse I have read in quite some time on this site. Wish I could assign a six-star rating, but have only fivers left now. "The angels alight on the ground..." is my favorite verse. Love the line about medical marijuana raining from the heavens! Very cool piece. Love it! God bless and hugs, Susanne
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Wow, mikey!! This is absolutely awesome work. Best free-verse I have read in quite some time on this site. Wish I could assign a six-star rating, but have only fivers left now. "The angels alight on the ground..." is my favorite verse. Love the line about medical marijuana raining from the heavens! Very cool piece. Love it! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
Comment from Pantygynt
This seems to me to the written result of taking a thought for a walk and letting one idea fertilise the next even unto the abhorred state of algebra to be eschewed up as small as possible before swallowing -- uh huh, you've got me doing it now. Think I'll stop and give it five before I get drawn back into the realm of that three line poem I reviewed earlier. I were the eschewing wot dun it.
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This seems to me to the written result of taking a thought for a walk and letting one idea fertilise the next even unto the abhorred state of algebra to be eschewed up as small as possible before swallowing -- uh huh, you've got me doing it now. Think I'll stop and give it five before I get drawn back into the realm of that three line poem I reviewed earlier. I were the eschewing wot dun it.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
