Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I was wondering when she would get her memory back. Excellent poem that describes her anger superbly. superb presentation and divine artwork you have chosen to go with these marvelous haikus. I enjoyed this one immensely.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you, sweetie pie,

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

Truly excellent work... the best haiku I have read in a long time accompanied by such a wonderful piece of artwork. You two are on quite the project and it's amazing so far!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thank you very much for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.

Gypsy

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016

Thank you very much for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.

Gypsy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The haiku horrorfest continues its bewitching dark tale of death and destruction. One day, probablwhen it is all done and one of you has written the dread words "The End" I am going to start at the beginning and read the whole thing through, but even as standalones I am enjoying these original Rumanian takes on the old Japanese form.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thank you very much, Sir Gynt for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.

Gypsy

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016

Thank you very much, Sir Gynt for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.

Gypsy

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-Another good Haiku for the project.
-Very effective imagery and alliteration
that adds to the mood and meaning.
-A dramatic satori that leaves no doubt about the outcome.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Sep-2016

You are very welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is another fine addition to the Hora haiku book
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Nice use of alliteration throughout
Interesting use of the group's name as the satori line
Consistently dark with excellent presentation
Well done

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy

Comment from sandy montgomery

Exceptional

I love the line "in sulfurous fiery sea". What a fantastic image that provokes. I don't know the sory here but this verse makes me want to. I found this crafted perfectly and have no criticism to offer. Wonderful job.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

thank you very much, my friend :) i love the pretty six stars, thank you.
gypsy

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Rose,

This is another nice poem to go with yours and Deans poetry. You and he are really great at writing poetry together and they are always a joy to read.

Kat

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy

reply by MizKat on 17-Sep-2016

You're very welcome. Kat

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Great beginning haiku. I read your Plan to write a horror haiku story, seems like a really great idea so good luck with that! Thanks
For posting

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Hello, Oliver. This is haiku number fifteen in the story. If you read the author notes you will find a book summary and a link for the other chapters. Thank you for reading. :)
gypsy

Comment from Unspoken94

Exceptional

Exceptional. You put a lot of work into developing
this piece for us to enjoy. Very well done. You and
Dean are really do a great job. -Bill

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you, Bill, you are very kind and I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem. Peace be with you.
gypsy

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Thoroughly enjoying the art which I think is absolutely the best you have chosen to add spectactlar to the word horror.
I am a little lost on this one, I am afraid to say. The heathens I assume are ones that do not like her?

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

yes :) those are the heathens. Thank you, Barb, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. peace be with you.
gypsy