Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Judy, I enjoyed your song and even could hear a tune to it. I liked the message of trying to encourage someone to live life fully

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016

He won by TKO, in the second round.

My biggest gift, is that despite the fact that he had to do interviews with the media. He called me for thirty seconds to say. I am glad you watched. My son loves me.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

It is important to always have the little girl inside of you. If you loose her you will be dead inside! i enjoyed reading your well-written poem. the words flowed together nicely.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016

thank you, Yep Judy still believes in life

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I enjoyed this and found it quite uplifting. I have the occasional pessimistic day but over-all, I think I am an optimist. Some may disagree, but that's how I view myself. Very nice work with this one, keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016

thanks I am such an incurable optimist.

reply by Sasha on 08-Sep-2016

That is a good quality...more should have that.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written uplifting poem/song, we can often let the pessimist in ourselves rule our ways of thinking and bring us down when we allow it.

Typos
line 4
I'm really for(far) from perfect.

line 1
A(all/and) kindness kills the thunder

I am not sure what you mean with this last line, maybe just leave out the 'A' if it will fit the rhythm you have in mind.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016

Thanks Sandra, i so appreciate it.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

You have written a very original song. I have enjoyed reading it very much.
You wrote for from perfect and I guess you meant far.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016

Yes, Far is what it was suppose to say lol. Thanks for the catch .