Comment from TheWriteTeach

Excellent

Wow. I don't know what to say. I was so shocked at the picture that I didn't even read your work for awhile! The Pope certainly is having a good look. Your 5-7-5 correlates absolutely perfect with the picture. I'm still in shock. Good luck in the contest.

Suzanne

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

I was actually shocked when I ran across this picture. There was another one which was even worse, but I chose not to use it. Figuring there might already be a lynching committee showing up in my front yard at anytime. Thank you so much, Suzanne, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Steve Blair

Excellent

Religion needs humor. This draws a giggle from me. Very simple. Not a bunch of big words. Sticks to the contest rules. Well done and write on!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you so much, SBlair, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

this is a very good entry into the humorous contest.looks like he was caught on the spot, with lens focused everywhere including his

Good luck in the contest Mary

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Mary, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I wasn't sure whether to titter here or just to laugh fit to bust! There sure does look like a look of incredulity on poor Papa's face. I enjoyed this entry to the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, TFawcus, for taking time to read my poem. I've checking out the windows every few minutes making sure there isn't a lynching committee in the front yard. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from TKField

Excellent

Sorry, I got so distracted by those humongous tits (and nipples), I never got around to reading the poem. I'm just going to assume it said something clever about how even some supposedly pious dude like the Pope enjoys getting an eyeful of some really big boobs occasionally. It's true, he's just like you and me. Looks as if he'd like to give Chesty Morgan here a good ol Dutch Rudder. I know I would. Mother Teresa may be a saint, but she can't compete with that rack on her best day. Ring-A Ding Ding!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thanks so much, TKField, for taking time to read my poem. I always enjoy your comments, and for sure there would be more wrong with any man who didn't like those boobs. LOL! Of course, I've been waiting for the lynching committee to show up in my front yard. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from okanaganbell

Excellent

I REALLY like the choices you made for this piece. We are ALL only human...even the Pope! I often did wonder, how 'do they keep' from being vulnerable to the weaknesses of the human race. I see from this photo and the cute hidden wording you have used, that not well enough to not show they are...human. Thanks for the enlightenment. Good job.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Yes, we are all human, even the pope. Of course, we don't know what he might have been thinking. Maybe he was just shocked that a woman would wear something that would show her breasts. I don't know. LOL! Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from EricBrady

Excellent

Hilarious, I think you nailed the humorous 5-7-5. I think he blessed her a few times already. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

I'm sure I'll need all the luck I can get with this one. Heck, they have already sent out a lynching committee already. Thank you so much, Eric Brady, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

I don't think this photo pic was really like this as maybe pasted together, though still I understand the haiku in the way presented...Yes, the pope is a man, he might once in awhile really let that show with his eyes, though, for me not an everyday occurrence..and he's what 78+, but doesn't act like it.....And, well, anyways does get those who view this, their attention.

Caressa_08

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. My guess is that he was just in shock that any woman would dress so skimpily. Oh, well, it sounds good. When I stumbled across this picture there was another that showed him leaning over kissing her breast. Of course, even I didn't have the kahunas to post that one. The lynching committee would already be on its way after me. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Gladys2013

Excellent

LOL I love this one! That picture is everything and the content is excellent. I'm sure any pope would want to bless his "children" if they looked like this lol funny, comical, and great word choice with such a carefree attitude. Awesome!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Gladys2013, for taking time to read my poem. When I ran upon this picture there was another one with the pope leaning over to kiss the woman's breast. But even I didn't have the kahunas to post that picture. Heck, I keep looking out my window now to see if the lynching committee is out in my front yard. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Julia.

Excellent

LOL. Even though this depends on the accompanying picture, it made me laugh. What is it with guys and breasts? Are they fascinated with them because they don't have them? I've asked several men and never received a satisfactory answer.

And yeah, regarding that photo...those aren't what God gave her. :)

Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

---

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

You know, honestly, you would have to ask another man. I don't really give a darn about breasts, and never have. I just stumbled across this picture, and another showing the pope leaning over to kiss her breast, of which I didn't have the kahunas to post. I mean, a lynching committee is probably out for me over this one. Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)