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Pope has an eye for art57 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
I must be a little thick because I can't find the humor in this. I have no idea what you are looking for.
But thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I must be a little thick because I can't find the humor in this. I have no idea what you are looking for.
But thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I'm sorry you don't find the humor in this, I'm just glad that everyone doesn't agree. Thanks for taking time to read my poem. :-)
Comment from Nika2016
This is hilarious. Yes...the pope is a male, too...biologically wired to look...You can't prevent it...so you might as well go with the flow..ladies. Your man will stare...It is when he starts touching ....hmmm
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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This is hilarious. Yes...the pope is a male, too...biologically wired to look...You can't prevent it...so you might as well go with the flow..ladies. Your man will stare...It is when he starts touching ....hmmm
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from LIJ Red
Whoever photoshopped that, beware the lightning. Il Papa, as my italian friends called him, has endured the sex life of a priest. Nun. Er, none.
Excellent art and 5/7/5.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Whoever photoshopped that, beware the lightning. Il Papa, as my italian friends called him, has endured the sex life of a priest. Nun. Er, none.
Excellent art and 5/7/5.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much, LIJ Red, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. I'm still checking my front yard every few minutes figuring there might be a lynching committee. LOL! :-)
Comment from lancellot
LOL, ha I'm thinking this is a case of funny photoshop work. But it does make for a humorous 5-7-5. I don't the young can be blessed anymore than she already is.
Nice one.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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LOL, ha I'm thinking this is a case of funny photoshop work. But it does make for a humorous 5-7-5. I don't the young can be blessed anymore than she already is.
Nice one.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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There was actually a second picture that showed the pope leaning over to kiss the breast. But even I didn't have the kahunas to post that one. I'm still peeking out the window expecting a lynching committee at any time. Thanks for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from RGstar
Well, at least it is in fun, I guess many might not see it so, but it is harmless banter and you deliver your theme, so I say, good luck for the humor of it all.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Well, at least it is in fun, I guess many might not see it so, but it is harmless banter and you deliver your theme, so I say, good luck for the humor of it all.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Yes, I'm still peeking out the window every few minutes expecting a lynching committee to be in my front yard. Of course, the woman was doing the talking and waving to her friends. The pope could have just been looking in shock at what he didn't expect to see. LOL! Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem You kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from jusylee72
Oh heavens even the pope is a boob man. This is a hilarious poem. So true. All men will understand and laugh at this one. Well written and certainly funny. Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Oh heavens even the pope is a boob man. This is a hilarious poem. So true. All men will understand and laugh at this one. Well written and certainly funny. Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from VaV-VOOM
You know I felt a few different things when I read this 5/7/5, like angry, disgust, and a lot of disrespect for the Pope and the church. I know poets take, make and do they own thing, but I myself was "very affined" and did not fine it funny at all. I feel the picture may have been altered and even if it was not he is human. I'll give it one star for the time it took to write. (THIS IS ONLY MY OPINION) God bless always. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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You know I felt a few different things when I read this 5/7/5, like angry, disgust, and a lot of disrespect for the Pope and the church. I know poets take, make and do they own thing, but I myself was "very affined" and did not fine it funny at all. I feel the picture may have been altered and even if it was not he is human. I'll give it one star for the time it took to write. (THIS IS ONLY MY OPINION) God bless always. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I'm sorry that you feel the way you do. The words were the woman's, and although nothing bad was said, the pope only glanced at the woman. He may have only been shocked to see a woman wearing such a revealing top. There was nothing meant disrespectful toward the pope, church or even the woman for that matter. You are right, he is only human. Some of us just need to lighten up and relax, and not take everything so personal. Our jobs on this site are to judge writing, not share our own personal opinions of whether we like something or not, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with this poem in any way, and certainly nothing that would make it deserve one star based on opinion only. The Bible says "Judge not least ye be judged." Wishing you the best!
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LOL! Like I said, "in my opinion" I was not putting you or your poetry down and I in no way thought you meant any disrespect towards the Pope, church, or the woman. I only gave you a review of how it affected me as I read it. I in no way wanted to put you or your poetry down. I have to say that, but I have to say, "I'm not on this site to judge any other poet's poetry. Only to give my opinion on how a poem I'm reviewing affects me as a poet and a person "Not Judge!" God bless you and yours. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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Sorry for the extra "I have to say that", i'm not very good at typing. VaV-VOOM!
Comment from The Death
It surely is humorous, but might be too bold for many. Since you are making fun of Pope, I don't think people are gonna enjoy it much. Big risk to have promoted it highly, as it might not pay you back. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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It surely is humorous, but might be too bold for many. Since you are making fun of Pope, I don't think people are gonna enjoy it much. Big risk to have promoted it highly, as it might not pay you back. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Yes, you are so right. I just received a one star review from someone saying that I was being disrespectful to the pope and the church. Which is the most ridiculous crap I ever heard. Some people just need to lighten up. Nothing was said disrespectful of anyone, the pope, the church, or the woman. The Italians call the pope big papa, the woman was waving to the crowd saying the pope wanted to bless her. And the pope may have just been totally shocked that a woman would wear such a revealing top. Sometimes, our filthy minds tend to take something innocent and turn it into something nasty. LOL! Well that's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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Hehe! I knew it was gonna happen to you. ;)
I was expecting 3 stars though, but it seems you badly crushed someone's sentiments. You can always report an unfair review, if you don't know it already. However, I do feel you aren't someone new, and I might have reviewed before. Time will tell. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! That is soooo funny, I wonder if he has seen this photo! Excellent choice of words, lol, and a really good all round presentation and read. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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LOL! That is soooo funny, I wonder if he has seen this photo! Excellent choice of words, lol, and a really good all round presentation and read. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I'm sure the pope was just shocked to see the woman wearing such a revealing top. LOL! Thanks for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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Well, you got my vote, it was so funny!
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Thank you, dear, sweet lady! :-)
Comment from DR DIP
He so wants to touch and canonize those puppies you can see it in his eyes lol
THE POPE CAN'T COPE
He sees a good erection
You can see his scope
As long as he has protection
The pope,is a daddy
he has been a baddy
He's checkin out each boob
I'm sure it will be on youtube!
dip
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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He so wants to touch and canonize those puppies you can see it in his eyes lol
THE POPE CAN'T COPE
He sees a good erection
You can see his scope
As long as he has protection
The pope,is a daddy
he has been a baddy
He's checkin out each boob
I'm sure it will be on youtube!
dip
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I keep peeking out my front window expecting to see a lynching committee. LOL! Thank you so much, DR DIP, for taking time to read my poem. It's always nice when you stop by and I always appreciate your kind words and generous reviews. :-)
