I've lost some teeth
7-7-7 contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from clsandau
This is certainly a lot of fun. Poor guy on your picture but he still looks happy. The 7-7-7 meter appears to be right on & you've rhymed all three lines. Very cute. Wishing you good luck!
Carol
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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This is certainly a lot of fun. Poor guy on your picture but he still looks happy. The 7-7-7 meter appears to be right on & you've rhymed all three lines. Very cute. Wishing you good luck!
Carol
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review Carol. I enjoy these little writing prompts.
God bless!
Comment from lancellot
Well, this was a funny one. If I can't see my own faults then they don't exist. I like that mindset. Your syllable count is perfect in every line.
Funny post. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Well, this was a funny one. If I can't see my own faults then they don't exist. I like that mindset. Your syllable count is perfect in every line.
Funny post. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Thank you Lancellot for the awesome review. I just wanted to have a bit of fun with it.
God bless!
Comment from VaV-VOOM
I just love this poem, it is just so so funny and fun to read. In my opinion though I'd make it a capital L for the second line (Liver). Anyhow great job and just a very funny read. God bless and good luck. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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I just love this poem, it is just so so funny and fun to read. In my opinion though I'd make it a capital L for the second line (Liver). Anyhow great job and just a very funny read. God bless and good luck. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you my friend for the awesome review.
God bless!
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Great read my friend. VaV-VOOM!
Comment from Craigitar
Here's the winner! If I enter this contest (and I'm not sure I will, now), it'll be just for practice and curiosity to see what I can come up with. Your philosophy is flawless, delivery, perfect and the humor, enviable. Excellent!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Here's the winner! If I enter this contest (and I'm not sure I will, now), it'll be just for practice and curiosity to see what I can come up with. Your philosophy is flawless, delivery, perfect and the humor, enviable. Excellent!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Wow! Thank you Craig for this amazing review with the beautiful six star rating. I am honored my friend. I had a lot of fun with this one.
God bless!
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a very good entry into the 7-7-7 aging poem contest, I am glad to see you have the teeth in your hand and they are not lost somewhere I wish you luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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This is a very good entry into the 7-7-7 aging poem contest, I am glad to see you have the teeth in your hand and they are not lost somewhere I wish you luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Thank you Mary for the awesome and humorous review.
God bless!
Comment from johngie
Mystery Author,
RONFLMAO!!!!!
Great job. That's a good one.
Picture and colors go great together.
Easy to read.
Syllable count is right on.
This should do really well in the contest. Best of luck to you.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Mystery Author,
RONFLMAO!!!!!
Great job. That's a good one.
Picture and colors go great together.
Easy to read.
Syllable count is right on.
This should do really well in the contest. Best of luck to you.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review Johngie.
God bless!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Image fits the poem.
-I like the witty nature of your entry.
-You have met the requirements of the prompt well.
-Good rhyme and alliteration.
-You use good imagery to address the topic.
-You have a very good concluding line!
-I like the narrator's attitude!
-Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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-Image fits the poem.
-I like the witty nature of your entry.
-You have met the requirements of the prompt well.
-Good rhyme and alliteration.
-You use good imagery to address the topic.
-You have a very good concluding line!
-I like the narrator's attitude!
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review Respa.
God bless!
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You are very welcome.
