Hair
Humorous 5-7-526 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Shoot! I would just be happy to still have some hair lol. Great piece of artwork you have chosen to accompany this humorous entry you have delivered.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Shoot! I would just be happy to still have some hair lol. Great piece of artwork you have chosen to accompany this humorous entry you have delivered.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you Steve
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My pleasure!
Comment from Bill O'Bier
A wonderful 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for sharing this delightful piece. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you all the best--
Bill~
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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A wonderful 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for sharing this delightful piece. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you all the best--
Bill~
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you Bill
Comment from rspoet
Excellent entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Those with straight and thin
long for those gorgeous curls
those with curls want straight
Some wish for any hair at all
and that's the long and short of it
Excellent picture to match humor
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Excellent entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Those with straight and thin
long for those gorgeous curls
those with curls want straight
Some wish for any hair at all
and that's the long and short of it
Excellent picture to match humor
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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So true, thank you for reviewing my poem.
Comment from humpwhistle
Straight and thin is my wish, too. And I'm not talking
about just my hair, either.
I got an elbow that won't elbow,
and a belly too belly.
Meanwhile, my hair is perfect.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Straight and thin is my wish, too. And I'm not talking
about just my hair, either.
I got an elbow that won't elbow,
and a belly too belly.
Meanwhile, my hair is perfect.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thanks Lee
Comment from William Ross
hahaha, nice, funny those that natural curls wish for straight hair and vice versa. my wife had straight hair all her life, lost her hair through cancer treatments, now it's growing in all curly, she loves it. have a great day and good luck on this.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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hahaha, nice, funny those that natural curls wish for straight hair and vice versa. my wife had straight hair all her life, lost her hair through cancer treatments, now it's growing in all curly, she loves it. have a great day and good luck on this.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thanks William. I wake up and shudder every day. LOL
Comment from Cynthia1
I don't know which made me laugh more, the illustration or the poem's words! We have all been there so it was easy to identify...You seem to have met the requirements for the 4 liner. Nice work.
Cynthia1
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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I don't know which made me laugh more, the illustration or the poem's words! We have all been there so it was easy to identify...You seem to have met the requirements for the 4 liner. Nice work.
Cynthia1
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you, I truly do have the hair, sad to say...
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You are welcome.
