Hair
Humorous 5-7-526 total reviews
Comment from ruzu27
Oh, I can relate. If one has got soft natural curls, all she ever wanted it straight short hair, wheras for the girl with the short straight blond hair, the greatest would be black curls all over.
We always seem to want something else. You chose a very nice piece of art for your humorous poem. It flows well and is goodto read,
This is a perfect subject for a humerous poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Oh, I can relate. If one has got soft natural curls, all she ever wanted it straight short hair, wheras for the girl with the short straight blond hair, the greatest would be black curls all over.
We always seem to want something else. You chose a very nice piece of art for your humorous poem. It flows well and is goodto read,
This is a perfect subject for a humerous poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Nika2016
How does anyone get a comb through that?
funny little poem about
naturally curly hair...
not much else to say
about short poems...
good work...
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How does anyone get a comb through that?
funny little poem about
naturally curly hair...
not much else to say
about short poems...
good work...
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
Comment from winnona
Interesting subject. I think you completed the challenge of this contest well. Your choice of words are good they combine sending the message of the poem to the reader.
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Interesting subject. I think you completed the challenge of this contest well. Your choice of words are good they combine sending the message of the poem to the reader.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, thick, curly, long, red hair can be beautiful, and everyone who sees it might be jealous, but only if they don't have to work with it every day. Thanks for sharing your fun poem and good luck in the contest. :-)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Yes, thick, curly, long, red hair can be beautiful, and everyone who sees it might be jealous, but only if they don't have to work with it every day. Thanks for sharing your fun poem and good luck in the contest. :-)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Alex Rosel
Well, this raised a smile when I read it. I can relate to this. The image, of course, adds to the humour. It's difficult to convey humour in so few syllables, and I think this lacks a little in that respect. It's more of a gentle prod at reality rather than laugh out loud humour. Nevertheless, an able entry. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Well, this raised a smile when I read it. I can relate to this. The image, of course, adds to the humour. It's difficult to convey humour in so few syllables, and I think this lacks a little in that respect. It's more of a gentle prod at reality rather than laugh out loud humour. Nevertheless, an able entry. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Comment from rydere
This, is something different to me , because I have black and straight, thin hair and sometimes I wish my hair was curls, frizz, thick, But I have learn to like and love my hair, so like and love your hair, cause some people would love to trade places with you. So please keep up with the great short poem and like the picture too enjoy.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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This, is something different to me , because I have black and straight, thin hair and sometimes I wish my hair was curls, frizz, thick, But I have learn to like and love my hair, so like and love your hair, cause some people would love to trade places with you. So please keep up with the great short poem and like the picture too enjoy.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Comment from write hand blue
Looks like a permanent bad hair day and that is bad.
Perhaps if you saw a ghost that might straighten out the curls a little. Even if it didn't you would most likely forget about those attractive curls.
An appropriate entry for the competition.
~Mel~
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Looks like a permanent bad hair day and that is bad.
Perhaps if you saw a ghost that might straighten out the curls a little. Even if it didn't you would most likely forget about those attractive curls.
An appropriate entry for the competition.
~Mel~
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you Mel
Comment from oliver818
Well done on this little poem, and finding a great photo to match it! I like the imagery and flow of this piece. Have a great day and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Well done on this little poem, and finding a great photo to match it! I like the imagery and flow of this piece. Have a great day and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good syllable count and the presentation is interesting. I get it but it's not my kind of humor. I wish you good luck with the contest, though.
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Good syllable count and the presentation is interesting. I get it but it's not my kind of humor. I wish you good luck with the contest, though.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, having frizzy, curly red hair is better than having no hair at all, right?
And that is ESPECIALLY true for women more so than for men, I would imagine.
Good luck to you in the 5-7-5 contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hey, having frizzy, curly red hair is better than having no hair at all, right?
And that is ESPECIALLY true for women more so than for men, I would imagine.
Good luck to you in the 5-7-5 contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you
