Poo Hoo
Worth a shot17 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I can just see this little boy saying exactly that. Of course, being one of those myself that might have said it, it definitely pushes my tickle button. Great job, and good luck in the contest. :-)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I can just see this little boy saying exactly that. Of course, being one of those myself that might have said it, it definitely pushes my tickle button. Great job, and good luck in the contest. :-)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hi Ric. Thanks for your read and review and I am so pleased you had a laugh I loved the image and thought it suited the poem .Thanls for your good luck message Cheers
Comment from Alex Rosel
This gave me a smile when I read it. The image is brilliant and adds to the humour. It's hard to relay humour in so few syllables, but you've achieved it. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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This gave me a smile when I read it. The image is brilliant and adds to the humour. It's hard to relay humour in so few syllables, but you've achieved it. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hi Axel, Thank you for stopping by to read my Poem and i can see you smiling Ha Ha and yes As soon as I found the image I thought yes this is the one ( seeing I could not get a picture of a dead shit bit hard to find those LOL ) have a great day Cheers also for your good luck message
Comment from Kooky Clown
I thought this was a fun little poem and now I have to write two and a half lines or more saying what I think about it or my review will not be accepted it will take me longer to write I like it a lot longer than it took you to write it life's a bitch!.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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I thought this was a fun little poem and now I have to write two and a half lines or more saying what I think about it or my review will not be accepted it will take me longer to write I like it a lot longer than it took you to write it life's a bitch!.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hi Kooky Clown, Thanks for your read and review much appreciated ( fullstop) and yes I totally agree with your padding a review out is quite annoying just to meet the FS wordcount. enough said Cheers
Comment from oliver818
Haha my mum would kill you for that but I think it's hilarious! A good piece for the humour contest! Thanks for posting and best of luck for the competition!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Haha my mum would kill you for that but I think it's hilarious! A good piece for the humour contest! Thanks for posting and best of luck for the competition!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hi Oliver, Don't let your Mum read this then and I am so pleased you found this hilarious and Thanks so much for your feedback and best of luck wishes Cheers
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good syllable count and the presentation is interesting, it looks hand drawn. I get the joke but it's not my kind of humor. My kids would love it, though.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Good syllable count and the presentation is interesting, it looks hand drawn. I get the joke but it's not my kind of humor. My kids would love it, though.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thanks Gypsy, for your review. I know it is a bit juvenile but glad the kids would love it. A bit of a play on words. Cheers
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Yeah, you are right. :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha (Oh crap! Did I just laugh out loud? Folks here are gonna hate me more than they already do!)
Well, I'll bet it was quite a tragedy for Christopher Robyn, Eore, and Rabbit to have to bear. Ol' Winnie had a heart as sweet as fresh honey.
Ah well. He lived a full and happy life, he hardly ever felt the need to hibernate as far as I know.
Now, he'll certainly get his chance.
Best of luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hahaha (Oh crap! Did I just laugh out loud? Folks here are gonna hate me more than they already do!)
Well, I'll bet it was quite a tragedy for Christopher Robyn, Eore, and Rabbit to have to bear. Ol' Winnie had a heart as sweet as fresh honey.
Ah well. He lived a full and happy life, he hardly ever felt the need to hibernate as far as I know.
Now, he'll certainly get his chance.
Best of luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 05-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Hi Dean, Ha Ha I see you laughing, Don't worry about the folks, ( sometimes jealousy is a curse) Thanks for your review and support Cheers
Comment from Gladys2013
Oh my lol well...you certainly made a point with this one. Short, direct, and to the point. Don't let any kids or Winnie The Pooh lovers read this just yet lol Otherwise nailed it on the humor
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Oh my lol well...you certainly made a point with this one. Short, direct, and to the point. Don't let any kids or Winnie The Pooh lovers read this just yet lol Otherwise nailed it on the humor
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Hi Gladys Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem for Poo .I am glad you LoL and hope it meets requirement Ha Ha Cheers
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Funny I laughed out loud, My wife, in the next room shouted, "What!" I wish I could stop here, FanStory says I must think of something else to say. Here's an idea, why don't we lobby for Haiku ratings?
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Funny I laughed out loud, My wife, in the next room shouted, "What!" I wish I could stop here, FanStory says I must think of something else to say. Here's an idea, why don't we lobby for Haiku ratings?
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Hi Thomas, Thanks very much and yes I agree sometimes you just have to keep writing until you make enough words. But I do Thank you for your time and review Cheers Haiku ratings good idea as long as the answer met 17 syllables LOL
Comment from Pantygynt
For getting this one down in 5-7-5 form you deserve a medal. Perhaps a poo coloured one since the golds, silvers and bronzes have all been given to Olympians.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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For getting this one down in 5-7-5 form you deserve a medal. Perhaps a poo coloured one since the golds, silvers and bronzes have all been given to Olympians.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Hi Pantygynt, That would be lovely on my mantelpiece I'll take it LOL. just a bit of fun . Thanks for your review Cheers
Comment from RoostyNester
You might say that the writers of Winnie the POO, might have encouraged this. haha. I liked your poem. Well done in words and vision of meaning.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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You might say that the writers of Winnie the POO, might have encouraged this. haha. I liked your poem. Well done in words and vision of meaning.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Hi RoostyNestor. Perhaps they did and I am glad you found it humerous. Thanks for your review and have a great day Cheers
