Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Oh, beautiful artwork displayed for quite the entry of poetry, and do like the very creative fourth line that reads: tossing bright rainbows, through the air... and what a nice thought to think of autumn leaves that descend as such..

Best Wishes for your entry...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thank you, Caressa!

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

A lovely poem which adheres to the Cinquain form and delivers a punch of emotion. Swirling through autumn leaves is beautiful imagery. Thank you for posting this; it's a delightful read :-)

Good luck with the competition.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

I am glad that you liked the poe, and I do appreciate your comments about the imagery.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Great description of dancing. A few years ago someone who's name excepts me sang a great song about dancing. "I Hope you Dance"

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Yes, I love that song, too. Glad you liked the poem.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

dancing
feet 'a flutter ...wonderful imagery, Cynthia, and great melody of "f"...
swirling through autumn leaves
tossing bright rainbows through the air
alive ... again, the images this conjures up in the mind's eye are superbly expressed.

Outstanding write, best of luck to you in the Cinquain poetry Contest.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Why, thank you, Dean. This is such a positive review, and I appreciate it very much.

reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Sep-2016

My pleasure. :)

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

:))

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I love the artwork.
-Format is good for your cinquain.
-I like the topic.
-Imagery is good with 'swirling' in leaves
and "tossing bright rainbows"
-You have a good entry that gets across the theme well.
-Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thank you for the very detailed and positive review. I do appreciate it.

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Sep-2016

You are very welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine Cinquain poem for the contest
with exact syllables to the form
Excellent visual imagery of dancing
using nature as a metaphor
You're captured the movement and the feeling
Very nicely done
with excellent art work to match
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thank you for the very specific and affirmative review. I do appreciate the good wishes.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Very nice poem, beautiful imagery! I especially love the line "tossing bright rainbows through the air", it's really evocative. Thanks for posting and good luck for the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thank you for the very positive review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem and especially the line about "tossing rainbows. Thank you, too, for the good wishes.
Cynthia1

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Beautiful description of the freedom felt in dancing, but the mention of autumn leaves depicted on another level the refreshing air that follows a long, hot summer. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

June,
I am so glad that you enjoyed the poem and that you appreciated it on both levels. Thank you for the review.
Cynthia1

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Cynthia, I love dancing as well...and how beautiful to dance through swirling autumn leaves...a wonderful dream...love your poem...and your picture is beautiful...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thank you! I am glad that you liked the poem and that you truly appreciate the freedom one feels from dancing. I notice that you also write about freedom. I recognize your poem with the eagle and I remember that I was very impressed with it. Blessings.
Cynthia1

reply by l.raven on 04-Sep-2016

thank you so all your kind words Cynthia...and so glad you like my freedom poem...and your are so welcome sweet girl...love Linda xxoo

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

:)))

reply by l.raven on 04-Sep-2016

smiling back at ya...xxoo Linda love

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good poem you have penned for the Cinquain contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. good luck in contest~ Teri

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 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thank you, Teri. I appreciate your positive remarks and good wishes.
Cynthia1