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Santa Comes To Our House

A Mouses Dreams Come True

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Comment from DR DIP
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That's not bad Mom, not bad at all will you be singing this? I always wondered if you had a voice Mom. Thanks for sharing the Christmas cheer.

dip

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2016
    Thank you son sorry I don't sing dogs howl when I do hehe. I just write them.
Comment from RYME4U
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This is a very nicely written child's Christmas song. I like the descriptions you have made and the repeated chorus makes it into a cute song.Good job

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2016
    Thank you
Comment from c_lucas
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Christmas comes around once a year. It is for all to enjoy. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016
    though the mice deserved a break haha
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, it's a little early for the Christmas bug to bite, but your song sure gives of lots of nice things to think about. Thanks for another fine read. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016
    Thanks for the nice gesture it is so needed to cheer people up and give them something to look forward to