Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written and exceptional.
It read Well and Flowed well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both excellent and exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018

Be surprised how many rips I got hungry claws. Big kitty. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.

Comment from Possummagic

Excellent

Enjoyed your piece of work. It is a t difficult to follow in parts but I accept that you are exercising your poetic license. In the second line it should possibly be "their deeds guide......" not guides.PM

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018

Appreciate the shout, I will review this write. Glad some aspects were found appealing to your interests even though flaws. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

unfortunately the battle rages on, the locations may change and the participants differ from time to time, but as your poem implies they don't end. well done, TPAC...................meeshu

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018

I for some reason have a trust in your statement, not certain why. At least I can feel I found a path of potential from woods. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm heart.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Officers defending others say right,
adults watching as instructors in might,
their deeds guides sheep to God's light.
Their deeds ...guide sheep to God's light.
Well penned poem. I like the thought
God bless

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018

Glad aspects of this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.

Comment from write hand blue

Average

A well presented poem with a picture of a strange mask.

I'm completely baffled, is there is any meaning to this?

You speak of Odin, is he your God?

I try to be interested in a believer of something that doesn't exist, but it's hard.

Please don't try to explain...

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Glad certain aspects caught your attention, God states many have given Him name: but few know His name. Thanking you for your honest, and generous rate: plus welcomed thoughts.

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

this is such a beautiful write i was interested from the title great picture strong write i hope to be able to read more of your writing great job.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Glad these notes found delight for you. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed views.