Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Well written. I like the attractive way you have presented this poem.You have used all the required words and rhymed it well. Good job!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your support and very kind comments. Blessings..........................

Comment from rydere

Excellent

This is nice poem to me, because I get lost a lot so I just trust in him more dis spike the wrong in the world, but I will love him a lot more now and try no do what he want me to do. Be watchful and look above
the time is "present"
Hence the "air" we breath
...in total essence
While giving honor
as the sun goes down
Giving way to the splendor of Earth
God's Glory renowned I like these words, and I know he is watching me everything that I do and I will leave it to him and like you said God's Glory is noknow, so keep up with the great work.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Your review and words of encouragement have touched my heart. Thanks so much for your support and very kind comments. Blessings my friend......................Portia

reply by rydere on 03-Sep-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a very good response to those prescribed words. I took a look at them but they didn't take me nowhere. So here I admire your creativity. My fave: "Fresh smell of "lilacs" sweetest smell of all."

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

This was a great challenge. Those words were not connected and we had to find a way. Very interesting use of words. You connect them well and come across as a caring and loving person.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings