The Dreadful Poet
Why I should stick to prose.6 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
Good try! This is humorous in a way You have used all the required words and your lines are expressed in a logical way.You do need a little help in "meter' keep at it, you'll get better as you go.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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Good try! This is humorous in a way You have used all the required words and your lines are expressed in a logical way.You do need a little help in "meter' keep at it, you'll get better as you go.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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I do need a lot of help! Thanks for reading and for your kind words.
Comment from jusylee72
You are truly funny. I enjoyed this so much. I could feel your tongue in cheek attitude trying hard to find a rhyme, any rhyme, I bet you are a delightful person in real life. i hope that you keep writing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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You are truly funny. I enjoyed this so much. I could feel your tongue in cheek attitude trying hard to find a rhyme, any rhyme, I bet you are a delightful person in real life. i hope that you keep writing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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I'm glad you enjoyed my silly little poem. And thanks for the compliments.
Comment from thonnigford09
I'm not the best of poets either, but I love to write poems. this was actually a very entertaining poem. Original in the way you turned a traditional poem to a more modern one. Thanks and I would recommend this and I liked the artwork.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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I'm not the best of poets either, but I love to write poems. this was actually a very entertaining poem. Original in the way you turned a traditional poem to a more modern one. Thanks and I would recommend this and I liked the artwork.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Thanks so much for your very kind review and for the six stars, I don't get too many of those and I never expected to get them for this poem. It's really sweet of you.
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Thanks. No Problem.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Very clever with this 'Use These Words"
contest."
"I liked how you symbolized your ability to write in PROSE and not Non- PROSE."
"I am actually the opposite."
"I got so good I am considered....
'A Slam Poet!"
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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"Very clever with this 'Use These Words"
contest."
"I liked how you symbolized your ability to write in PROSE and not Non- PROSE."
"I am actually the opposite."
"I got so good I am considered....
'A Slam Poet!"
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your very funny review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha this is too funny. I enjoyed it very much. Good job incorporating those words into your lines. I like the rhyming couplets. The artwork is funny, too.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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haha this is too funny. I enjoyed it very much. Good job incorporating those words into your lines. I like the rhyming couplets. The artwork is funny, too.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Pyrrho
I love your not-so-subtle ruse of using your poem as an example of the analysis of some poems that you are writing. And I notice I have created a dangling participle in my first sentence which I will retain.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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I love your not-so-subtle ruse of using your poem as an example of the analysis of some poems that you are writing. And I notice I have created a dangling participle in my first sentence which I will retain.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your review and for taking the time to read my little piece.
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Slainte
