Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this lovely imagery. The only constructive observation I have at this time is that you use the word "finger/fingers" twice and might want to find a synonym to replace one instance. Well done overall.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Thank you Randal, for your kind review and suggestions for improvement. These are always well received and appreciated! Kindest regards and blessings always: HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Thank you for your prayer, Vance. You are the most giving, caring presence here on FanStory--a blessing to all your fans. May God richly bless you on this side of life as well as you KNOW He will on the other side.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Thank you so much Jay, for your rich and warm review. I am truly honored! Blessings always! Vance

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

This poem reminds me of a prayer as you described in your authors notes. Well done and very good original poem. Excellent.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Thank you Donald, for your very kind review and generous stars. My best wishes and blessings! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is a soft poem describing the gentle side of God. The example of earthly things of softness are creative comparisons.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016

Thank you! vance