Peace will Come
Prophecy for end of days.26 total reviews
Comment from Patricia Crandall
This is a faith poem with historical references, Eagle, Bear, Dragon and Lion. It flows well and speaks of the possibility of peace. Faith brings unity, wars will cease. A good line describing the essence of the poem. I would recommend it.
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This is a faith poem with historical references, Eagle, Bear, Dragon and Lion. It flows well and speaks of the possibility of peace. Faith brings unity, wars will cease. A good line describing the essence of the poem. I would recommend it.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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Hello Patricia, Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Yes, peace will come when men return to the Creator. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from RoostyNester
A very nice faith spiritual poem. Peace between the nations would be a great achievement, which only Jesus can bring about. I thought your poem was well done with style and rhyme.
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A very nice faith spiritual poem. Peace between the nations would be a great achievement, which only Jesus can bring about. I thought your poem was well done with style and rhyme.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
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Hello friend, Thanks for reading and yes, Jesus will bring peace to the world. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Aussie :) How are you sweetie pie?
I like your religious poem for the faith poetry contest. It's mythical and a little scary. I don't like talking about the end of the world but your poem has a nice ending that gives people hope.
Good job!
Gypsy
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Hello, Aussie :) How are you sweetie pie?
I like your religious poem for the faith poetry contest. It's mythical and a little scary. I don't like talking about the end of the world but your poem has a nice ending that gives people hope.
Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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Hello Gypsy, Thanks for dropping in. Faith is the evidence of things not yet seen. Bless you my friend. Love, Kay.
Comment from royowen
Well done with this one Kay, I like the national definitions of the national animal symbols, contrasting, in my mind at least, with the faces of the four gospels. The eagle, the ox, the lion and the man. Well done, beautifully scribed and presented, the narrative's cadence is great, the aabb rhyming is seamless and impressive, well done, blessings, Roy
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Well done with this one Kay, I like the national definitions of the national animal symbols, contrasting, in my mind at least, with the faces of the four gospels. The eagle, the ox, the lion and the man. Well done, beautifully scribed and presented, the narrative's cadence is great, the aabb rhyming is seamless and impressive, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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Hello happy traveller, Thanks so much for reading and of course, understanding, it has been well received. Blessings, Kay.
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Well done Kay
Comment from CALLAHANMR
you poem reinforces the promise of Revelations when a time will come when the forces of evil will be swept away by the faithful who retain their faith in salvation and lasting peace,
Nice rhyming couplets. Good luck in the contest.
Roger
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you poem reinforces the promise of Revelations when a time will come when the forces of evil will be swept away by the faithful who retain their faith in salvation and lasting peace,
Nice rhyming couplets. Good luck in the contest.
Roger
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
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Hello Roger, Thanks for dropping in. They are quatrains by the way. Have a nice day. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
I hope you are right, Aussie dear; however, what peace did Jesus see, I think setting the seeds of our humanity. Yes! Farmers need faith as they nurture the seeds that sustain us, and I think God and the Divine Plan too. And, for that reason, he gave us choice, respond-ability, knowledge of love and our potential to create and nurture new life.
Sadly, I am not sure that popary has lost the upper hand, or that evil-lies, rather than live turns the most powerful worldly hands - upper and lower, backward or forward. Live-evil, both a God gifted choice!
But enjoying a majestic day in Byron Bay I do have faith in our ripening human hearts, power and joy of co-creation and love which is Good- God and delightful to share, thank you, Maureen*&*
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I hope you are right, Aussie dear; however, what peace did Jesus see, I think setting the seeds of our humanity. Yes! Farmers need faith as they nurture the seeds that sustain us, and I think God and the Divine Plan too. And, for that reason, he gave us choice, respond-ability, knowledge of love and our potential to create and nurture new life.
Sadly, I am not sure that popary has lost the upper hand, or that evil-lies, rather than live turns the most powerful worldly hands - upper and lower, backward or forward. Live-evil, both a God gifted choice!
But enjoying a majestic day in Byron Bay I do have faith in our ripening human hearts, power and joy of co-creation and love which is Good- God and delightful to share, thank you, Maureen*&*
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
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Thank you Maureen. Faith is the evidence of things not yet seen (Bible) have a lovely day in Byron Bay. Blessings, Kay.
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Mm I feel faith and the Bible are not evidence in unseen things so much as doorways one steps to explore and develop experience that is not objective or scientifically quantifiable. But many objective realities begin as such, love, faith that give meaning and motivation for what we consider reality. Indeed, I feel wondrous dimensions of reality open up when we start to actually define what faith means to each of us and the interconnected diversity, just the same as `a holiday' or perhaps, `a cake'. My philosophy for tonight, thanks for the inspiration. Blessings, Maureen*&*
