Comment from Caressa_08

Exceptional

Well, quite the photo and poem that explains what is going on here... Though never have I seen nuns with high heels, though... I think this is the funniest one out of the group of entries, and all three lines rhyme...And, it made me laugh as the others well, they were corny or very sickening one, or two I found to be....though this made me laugh...Oops, even if I was baptized Catholic, no disrespect to nuns, though unlikely to see nuns out an about like this or they will no longer be nuns, after caught like this, or be reprimanded for sure....Looks to be they might of got a little tipsy and that caused the change of habit.

Thanks for sharing & keep writing...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016

Caressa,

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review and the six star rating. I am glad my poem made you laugh, I really appreciate your very kind comments and support, Blessings my friend you made my day!...............Portia

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This one was well written. The humor is good. The chosen words that describe the nun's buns is very clever, the picture is hilarious, great job!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your review and kind comments. Blessings.................Portia

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha What a fun poem. You did a great job with the prompt. Good job on the correct syllable count. The picture is priceless.

Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Jan,
Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed this little fun poem. Thanks for your review and best wishes. Blessings...........Portia

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah!
I actually had to take a look at this twice to make sure that I was seeing what I thought I was seeing, Portia.
Ain't optical illusions a gas, LOL?
Great entry for the contest...
~Dean

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Dean,
I was like you, when I came across the photo I had to take a second look. Thanks so much for your review and best wishes.

Blessings.............from the Nuns and me! LOL....Portia

reply by Dean Kuch on 23-Aug-2016

It was my pleasure. :)

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

LOL .... good one Portia! This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line count, syllable count, and rhyme scheme. Did they paint their nails too? I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your support and encouraging words. Blessings.........Portia

reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 23-Aug-2016

Blessings right back at you! And I won't tell the nuns you spied on them having fun LOL.

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Glad to hear this is our secret..........Portia

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Oh Portia! This is SO much fun! Look at that photo, too funny! ;)
I love it!
Beautifully written and with such great humor! I do hope it does well in the contest!
Great job
love and laughter to you dear friend
Cat

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Cat,

I was searching Google images for a funny picture and when I saw the one of the Nuns, I thought this will be perfect. Thanks so much for your review, support and encouraging comments. When I saw your review, it put a smile on my face. So glad to hear from you. Lots of love...................Portia

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Sister Marie. Is that you. Makes me wish I were Catholic. Very funny post. I'm going to share it with my Sunday School class.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review. Let me know the reaction from your Sunday School class when they see it. I been told the picture tells the story. Blessings......................Portia

reply by Thomas Bowling on 23-Aug-2016

One picture is worth a thousand Hail Mary's.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I'd be more impressed if your poem
wasn't derived from an existing photo.
Basically, you wrote a caption.
Yes, it rhymes, but the art is in the photo, no?

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016

Well my friend, I guess I will totally agree with you, the picture tells the story I just added the words. Thanks so much for your review, rating and comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..................Portia