Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Great job. The nonet style is well done here. The message is sad and the human emotion comes through quite well, This is nicely presented, too.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, Funeral Blues, uses the format correctly and descends with the speaker's tone as the idea of a funeral and the finality become real and end with Tge word... Sad.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

Thanks for reading my little poem

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a very well-written nonet all the syllables are correct, It is also a very sad one about your grandmother's funeral. I wish you the best of luck in the contest Mary

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review.