Tense Situation
2-4-2 contest entry27 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Hi Johngie, that artwork does say tense situation! Instant relaxation is needed when things are that tense. Perfect syllable count too.
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Hi Johngie, that artwork does say tense situation! Instant relaxation is needed when things are that tense. Perfect syllable count too.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2016
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting 2-4-2 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good luck in the contest. Teri
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This is a very interesting 2-4-2 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good luck in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
Comment from EricBrady
Oh that sounds so good! Eight syllables that say so much. Great 2-4-2 poem that screams hot bath with lavender salts. Love the chosen artwork. Everyone will be feeling this one.Best wishes.
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Oh that sounds so good! Eight syllables that say so much. Great 2-4-2 poem that screams hot bath with lavender salts. Love the chosen artwork. Everyone will be feeling this one.Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
Comment from papa55mike
What a great poem and I love the picture. I feel like the picture most days but writing helps to keep me sane. It's the one thing I find complete peace in. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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What a great poem and I love the picture. I feel like the picture most days but writing helps to keep me sane. It's the one thing I find complete peace in. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
Comment from liz burgoyne
Ha! The picture stressed me out, then I laughed at your words. you got me, Johngie with your clever 2-4-2. Good luck in the contest that is just about to start!
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Ha! The picture stressed me out, then I laughed at your words. you got me, Johngie with your clever 2-4-2. Good luck in the contest that is just about to start!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2016
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I was in one of these moments just today! Great imagery to accompany your 2/4/2 compleye in no less than three words! We) done :)
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I was in one of these moments just today! Great imagery to accompany your 2/4/2 compleye in no less than three words! We) done :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
Comment from William Ross
yes just what's need for tense moments, good job on the 2.4.2 and the prompt. this should do well, good luck and have a good day.
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yes just what's need for tense moments, good job on the 2.4.2 and the prompt. this should do well, good luck and have a good day.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
For a Tense Situation, you know just what is needed.
instant
relaxation
needed
Sounds like an excellent plan.
Good 2/4/2 poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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For a Tense Situation, you know just what is needed.
instant
relaxation
needed
Sounds like an excellent plan.
Good 2/4/2 poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
Comment from Julia.
Kudos for doing this poem in not just 8 syllables, but also in just three words. However, and maybe because of that, the poem demonstrate any poetic technique such as imagery, metaphor, etc. The three words do play off nicely against the title of the poem--which is really required to make this work--so that's also nice. Good luck in the contest!
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Kudos for doing this poem in not just 8 syllables, but also in just three words. However, and maybe because of that, the poem demonstrate any poetic technique such as imagery, metaphor, etc. The three words do play off nicely against the title of the poem--which is really required to make this work--so that's also nice. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes!!! How perfect...said in 8 syllables, the advice doctors charge a fortune for! Wonderful 2-4-2....good luck, and blessings....
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Yes!!! How perfect...said in 8 syllables, the advice doctors charge a fortune for! Wonderful 2-4-2....good luck, and blessings....
Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
