Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. When shadows appear we can know the sun is there behind them shining to form the shadows.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you Sandra:)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, hopefully we do, Teresa.
Unfortunately that's not the case for all of us, I'm afraid.
A very well expressed 2-4-2 which says a great deal in very few concise words.
Best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest, Teresa.
~Dean

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you Dean:)

reply by Dean Kuch on 17-Aug-2016

Anytime.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Very beautiful and very descriptive in this little piece.
Strong and wonderfully done.
As the sun moves so do the shadows like they are alive and running from the darkness.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you Barb:)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hi Teresa;
-I like how you use the picture in the writing to coincide the theory, metaphor and concept of your writing. There's a word that they use for it and I forget how to spell it. Anyway, I thought it was very effective that two of the picture and the writing work so well together and explaining your idea.
-Great imagery that is so definitely expressive and very vividly descriptive.
-Often do I realize that certain things around me express the sun without actually leaking of the sun as though it is a third-party that's only reminiscent of what it acts upon and in this case the tree.
-A very great 2/4/2 syllabic format.
-Good luck in the contest Teresa and take care and have a good one.
Alec

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you Alex for the great review and good luck wishes. blessings.

reply by krys123 on 17-Aug-2016

You are very welcome Teresa and have a good one.
Alex

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Teresa,

This seems like a poem I read before. It sure is written well and is a joy to read.
I'll be looking forward to more of your wonderful work.

Kat

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 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thanks Kat:)

reply by MizKat on 17-Aug-2016

You're welcome. Kat

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I never cease to be amazed at how much can be described in so few words. I thoroughly enjoyed your use of personification and abundant alliteration. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 contest- Joan

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 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thanks so much Joan. I didn't think I was going to enter this contest, then while I was on a morning walk, the words just came to me.