My Soul
What a soul means to me...30 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very well done, Anonymous Poet.
Not only is this uniquely formatted piece well written and impeccably well rhymed, but the message is also extremely uplifting and inspirational in its delivery.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Very well done, Anonymous Poet.
Not only is this uniquely formatted piece well written and impeccably well rhymed, but the message is also extremely uplifting and inspirational in its delivery.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Hi Deano, thank you for this wonderful review...I'm smiling!!!
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**SMILING**
Me too, Susan.
See?
You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, this is a very good piece of poetry for this writing prompt! The flow is also very good! I like your rhyme scheme and. You mix the thought provoking aspect into your poignancy. Your last stanza truly Susan says it all as a soul writer. Good luck my friend,,,,,,,, Jimmy
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Susan, this is a very good piece of poetry for this writing prompt! The flow is also very good! I like your rhyme scheme and. You mix the thought provoking aspect into your poignancy. Your last stanza truly Susan says it all as a soul writer. Good luck my friend,,,,,,,, Jimmy
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Hi jimmy, thanks for reading and this wonderful review!! much appreciated friend!
Comment from frogbook
This is superb and so far in my reading of the entries is my favorite. Extremely well composed with excellent and interesting form and outstanding rhyming. Should be a top contender.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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This is superb and so far in my reading of the entries is my favorite. Extremely well composed with excellent and interesting form and outstanding rhyming. Should be a top contender.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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awe thank you so much for this kind review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a really good entry to the contest, your definition of the soul is as I would define it. We all have to look after it, and keep it pure for the time our soul is called home. I loved that line too. well done, and good luck! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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This is a really good entry to the contest, your definition of the soul is as I would define it. We all have to look after it, and keep it pure for the time our soul is called home. I loved that line too. well done, and good luck! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Thank you dear!!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully. You walk us through the mansion of your soul on a tour of well executed imagery and graceful rhyme and meter. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully. You walk us through the mansion of your soul on a tour of well executed imagery and graceful rhyme and meter. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Thank you for this wonderful review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Great entry into the Soul Writer contest. Nice rhythm and rhyme throughout. Especially liked:
This mystery can't be explained
yet, a knowing to be sustained
undeniable living part
a loving master's work of
art.
Great verse! Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Great entry into the Soul Writer contest. Nice rhythm and rhyme throughout. Especially liked:
This mystery can't be explained
yet, a knowing to be sustained
undeniable living part
a loving master's work of
art.
Great verse! Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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you like that huh??...I have no idea how i came up with that...I can't always explain words floating in my head!! lol thanks for the great review!!!!
Comment from winnona
beautifully written,the words flowed together combining and forming their own unique rhythm. Your choice of artwork and background color complete the poem, good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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beautifully written,the words flowed together combining and forming their own unique rhythm. Your choice of artwork and background color complete the poem, good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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awe thanks for the great review!!!
Comment from Bridge
A beautiful poem . Very well written especially considering the limitations you had to work with. All the best in the contest.
Regards
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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A beautiful poem . Very well written especially considering the limitations you had to work with. All the best in the contest.
Regards
Comment Written 15-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much for reading and the review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from jusylee72
Great job describing a soul in less than one hundred and fifty words. I liked the way you structured each verse the same.
undeniable living part
a loving master's work of
art
This is just one of my favorite parts. I like your whole concept. Very nicely done.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great job describing a soul in less than one hundred and fifty words. I liked the way you structured each verse the same.
undeniable living part
a loving master's work of
art
This is just one of my favorite parts. I like your whole concept. Very nicely done.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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You so sweet!!! thanks so much!!!
Comment from rockinm76233
Great poem. I enjoyed the words immensely. Don't think I'd ever thought of a soul definition before. But, you seemed to have no problem at all with defining what soul means to you. I very much enjoyed the words and the read.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great poem. I enjoyed the words immensely. Don't think I'd ever thought of a soul definition before. But, you seemed to have no problem at all with defining what soul means to you. I very much enjoyed the words and the read.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Awe thanks for the sweet review!!! much appreciated!!
