My Soul
What a soul means to me...30 total reviews
Comment from MacMhuirich
This is such a wonderful read and I can understand why you won this contest. You've laid your soul bare and confessed that God will welcome your soul home. I love this last line 'Till the day my soul is called home'. Congratulations on the win.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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This is such a wonderful read and I can understand why you won this contest. You've laid your soul bare and confessed that God will welcome your soul home. I love this last line 'Till the day my soul is called home'. Congratulations on the win.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Hello Dear John,...I like that line too....brings a lot of comfort to me. Thanks for reading and the review!!! Always like hearing from you!!! Take care!!
Comment from joannakruk
A very deep and religiously inspired appreciation for the soul. Your faith resonates deeply in this.l piece and creates a sense that you are entirely confident with yourself as you know you are spiritually supported. Well done
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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A very deep and religiously inspired appreciation for the soul. Your faith resonates deeply in this.l piece and creates a sense that you are entirely confident with yourself as you know you are spiritually supported. Well done
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Oh thank you dear!!! appreciate your great review!!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I can see why you won. I love how beautifully this was written. But beyond your wonderful choice of words, the message was astounding. You mirrored a lot of what I believe. Your presentation was great and the rhyme was perfect. Well done and congratulations. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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I can see why you won. I love how beautifully this was written. But beyond your wonderful choice of words, the message was astounding. You mirrored a lot of what I believe. Your presentation was great and the rhyme was perfect. Well done and congratulations. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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OMG this review is better than the poem!!! thanks so much!!! :-)
Comment from RoostyNester
Very nice "what is a soul" poem. Well written and strong in substance of feeling. I like the style and the words used to express your message. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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Very nice "what is a soul" poem. Well written and strong in substance of feeling. I like the style and the words used to express your message. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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Oh thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!!! Glad you liked this poem of mine!!!
Comment from nancyjam
Congratulations on winning this contest.
You have conveyed your thoughts on the
soul beautifully.
We are constantly fighting to keep our
soul pure so we may spend eternity with God.
So worth the effort though.
Nancy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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Congratulations on winning this contest.
You have conveyed your thoughts on the
soul beautifully.
We are constantly fighting to keep our
soul pure so we may spend eternity with God.
So worth the effort though.
Nancy
Comment Written 18-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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You are so sweet!! thank you for reading and for this wonderful review!!
Comment from Bill O'Bier
The soul is the self, the "I" that inhabits the body and acts through it.the It is the spiritual part of a person that is believed to give life to the body and in many religions is believed to live forever. Yours must be beautiful as is your poem. Congratulations on winning the contest.
Wishing you the best,
Bill~
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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The soul is the self, the "I" that inhabits the body and acts through it.the It is the spiritual part of a person that is believed to give life to the body and in many religions is believed to live forever. Yours must be beautiful as is your poem. Congratulations on winning the contest.
Wishing you the best,
Bill~
Comment Written 18-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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6!!!! Bill!! thank you so much!! I appreciate you reading AND this wonderful review!!!! Thanks again! :-)))
Comment from Alex Rosel
I like how you've constructed this; each verse further develops, building on the previous ones.
Till the day my soul is called home. - A lovely ending; sad, and yet somehow uplifting with an upbeat tone.
Your writing style provides a nice easy read. It's as though you were personally speaking this to me as we sit in the sun somewhere, each cradling a drink.
Thank you for an inspirational post :-)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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I like how you've constructed this; each verse further develops, building on the previous ones.
Till the day my soul is called home. - A lovely ending; sad, and yet somehow uplifting with an upbeat tone.
Your writing style provides a nice easy read. It's as though you were personally speaking this to me as we sit in the sun somewhere, each cradling a drink.
Thank you for an inspirational post :-)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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this review is just lovely!!!! thank you so very much!!!
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Thank you for your kind comments :-)
Comment from DR DIP
What a wonderful wonderful write Susan I am so glad I found this one You are a beautiful writer of rhyming verse and you so deserve this contest win.
beautifully written in AABB rhyme scheme
one of my favourite verses
Encompassed faith with desire
teeters between constant fire
As purity is directed
a gentle spirit
reflected.
xdip
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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What a wonderful wonderful write Susan I am so glad I found this one You are a beautiful writer of rhyming verse and you so deserve this contest win.
beautifully written in AABB rhyme scheme
one of my favourite verses
Encompassed faith with desire
teeters between constant fire
As purity is directed
a gentle spirit
reflected.
xdip
Comment Written 18-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
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6!! no way!! you so sweet!!! glad you like this.....so you like those lines huh?? yes, me too..thanks so much for this review..im smiling
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way!
Comment from Bill Schott
The poem on the soul, My Soul, sounds like it could be rapped. The aligning of the soul with a heaven is clearly seen here and the purpose we have to preserve what is eternal. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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The poem on the soul, My Soul, sounds like it could be rapped. The aligning of the soul with a heaven is clearly seen here and the purpose we have to preserve what is eternal. Nice poem.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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That's Funny Bill, i just said the same thing to DR DIP!!!!! and now i'm rapping my poem...thanks for reading and the review..always appreciate!!! :-)))
Comment from michaelcahill
Exceptionally poetic and profound. So very well done, Ms. Susan. A difficult topic and one where people can go right off the deep end into gobbledygook land. LOL
You stay on point with your theme and point and bring it home beautifully. A most worthy winner. Well done. mikey
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Exceptionally poetic and profound. So very well done, Ms. Susan. A difficult topic and one where people can go right off the deep end into gobbledygook land. LOL
You stay on point with your theme and point and bring it home beautifully. A most worthy winner. Well done. mikey
Comment Written 17-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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Hi Michael, you sweet boy! thanks for this very kind review!!! much appreciated!
