My Soul
What a soul means to me...30 total reviews
Comment from EMB
Great verses, but I think you said it best when you admitted that this mystery cannot be explained. Still, this was a great effort in doing so.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
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Great verses, but I think you said it best when you admitted that this mystery cannot be explained. Still, this was a great effort in doing so.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much!!! appreciate the review!
Comment from Janet Foor
Congratulations on the win Susan. You described "soul" beautifully in the thoughtful piece. My favorite stanza was:
This mystery can't be explained
yet, a knowing to be sustained
undeniable living part
a loving master's work of
art.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Congratulations on the win Susan. You described "soul" beautifully in the thoughtful piece. My favorite stanza was:
This mystery can't be explained
yet, a knowing to be sustained
undeniable living part
a loving master's work of
art.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Thanks Janet!! wonderful review....I'm smiling!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. First, congratulations in winning the contest. The soul belongs to God and our bodies are just a vehicle to transport the soul.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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A very well-written poem. First, congratulations in winning the contest. The soul belongs to God and our bodies are just a vehicle to transport the soul.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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Thank you Sandra, always appreciate your wonderful reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
Contest winner, well, I certainly shall not argue with that, and fortunately for my conscience I see no need to, though the broken last lines are not essential to the eight-syllable beat...excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Contest winner, well, I certainly shall not argue with that, and fortunately for my conscience I see no need to, though the broken last lines are not essential to the eight-syllable beat...excellent.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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what? 8 sllable beat what? english please? :-)
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Beat...rhythm...meter...dum das...no big thing...
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yes, still learning meter...stressed unstressed..ugh...actually lol still learning everything!! thanks for the review!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Love thought expressed beautifully. I wish my sister could have passed in such a peaceful fashion. She died screaming and trying to hold onto life.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Love thought expressed beautifully. I wish my sister could have passed in such a peaceful fashion. She died screaming and trying to hold onto life.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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What do you mean screaming??? omgoodness...thats awful..
Comment from Irish Rain
Congratulations on first place with this lovely interpretation of 'soul'. I agree, we will always roam, in our earthly forms....this is beautiful...blessings...
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Congratulations on first place with this lovely interpretation of 'soul'. I agree, we will always roam, in our earthly forms....this is beautiful...blessings...
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Awe thank you so much for this kind review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from William Ross
very good, nicely done and congrats on the win. it's said the body is the temple of the lord, the soul is a little piece of the lord in each of us, when we die it does back to the lord if we live according to his word in love and faith. we can destroy part of gods soul in the misdeeds man does murder, rape so on and so on. he gave it to us to help guide us, if we listened to it. have a great day
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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very good, nicely done and congrats on the win. it's said the body is the temple of the lord, the soul is a little piece of the lord in each of us, when we die it does back to the lord if we live according to his word in love and faith. we can destroy part of gods soul in the misdeeds man does murder, rape so on and so on. he gave it to us to help guide us, if we listened to it. have a great day
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Thanks for the great review!!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Jackarrie
Congratulations on winning this contest. You have expressed your thoughts about the soul so eloquently and with intensity. I wish I had a six for this wonderful piece of excellence.
well done Mary
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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Congratulations on winning this contest. You have expressed your thoughts about the soul so eloquently and with intensity. I wish I had a six for this wonderful piece of excellence.
well done Mary
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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oh you're sweet!! thank you so much for the wonderful review!!
Comment from honeytree
We are born to live
then one day die
We are not perfect
we will sin as we are human
Great art work and words written.
Honey tree
I have no six left
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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We are born to live
then one day die
We are not perfect
we will sin as we are human
Great art work and words written.
Honey tree
I have no six left
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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awe thanks for the great review!!! very much appreciated!!
Comment from bob cullen
I can see why this won. You certainly have portrayed the soul superbly.
Loved the rhyme but I thought the message was certainly the poem's strong point.
I wish I could create something this good.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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I can see why this won. You certainly have portrayed the soul superbly.
Loved the rhyme but I thought the message was certainly the poem's strong point.
I wish I could create something this good.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016
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You are too kind!! thanks for reading and the great review!!!..and trust me!!! if I can...YOU can TOO!!!! :-)
