Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

You've made a good observation in your short piece. To stay
fixed on our own path without deviating may be challenging
at times. Nicely done. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016

Thanks for the insightful review. Some people do not understand my path, but it is my journey,, and my own path. Cheers, j

reply by BeasPeas on 15-Aug-2016

Blessings to you on yours and we all have our own journey to maintain. Marilyn

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Yes, I like this entry for the Senryu yourself writing prompt contest. The syllables are in check and the message conveyed is one that shows how easy it is to walk in a different direction and succumb to peer pressure. Nicely done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016

Thanks for the insightful review. It was fun to write, cheers, j

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, we should all walk our own paths though there are some that are tempting. Nicely done on this good luck and have a great day.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016

Thanks William for the insightful review. It was a fun write, cheers, j