Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

I am so sorry but the format has to be long/short /long. I accidentally made that mistake.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016

I changed it, is this what you mean? Cheers, j

reply by rjuselius on 14-Aug-2016

Unfortunately not. Yours is still short/long/short..
Rebekka x

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I had hoped to see this spectacle last night, but we had storms and cloudy skies. Your poem describes the phenomenon both literally and figuratively as an onlooker would view it. I hope you were fortunate enough to be one.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016

I had to get up at 4 am to see it here in Tanzania, but it was also overcast. I always imagine people in pyjamas watching these natural events, hah Cheers, j

Comment from rockinm76233

Excellent

And this August, here in Texas, has been superb. Many meteors streak across the sky nightly. Enjoyed your words and the nature haiku. Thanks for sharing the beautiful phenomenon with readers.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016

Thanks for the review. I have to set my alarm for 4 am here in Tanzania to see it. I love stargazing in Vermont, I am in the woods, so no light influence, just me and the stars, cheers, j

reply by rockinm76233 on 13-Aug-2016

Your welcome.