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Being a Universal soldier

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Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a well done emotional and potent write. I think what you're saying here is that we should never get involved in any cause regardless of the circumstances. Is this realistic? Wouldn't it be wonderful if there were no conflicts or wars--ever? However, is it possible? Do human beings make it a practice to play nice with others? One can only pray that one day they can. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

Comment from RYME4U
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This is well written and very nostalgic for me. I was a child during WWarII and most of the events your poem mentioned. All I can say is THANK YOU FOR THE SACRIFICES YOU MADE FOR US. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2016

Comment from zatanna
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The tagline of what to write was "political rant" Your focus here is about war and how it affected you. Sherman from what I read (Im not american so excuse me) was a solider. You mentioned numerous wars and 911 nothing really connected with a political rant. A war rant sure! Your story was good for a war rant, and the ending was a oh no kinda moment.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

Comment from tkay
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very good read a look into a soldiers mind, the things they go through, makes an ordinary person think about what others see

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016