Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Well I certainly learnt a lot reading your author's notes here Mystic. Thankyou
Your poem using ABAB rhyme scheme creates a great rhythm when reading well done

dip

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much. I am so happy you enjoyed it and truly appreciate your time and kind feedback.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Brilliantly crafted piece you have delivered here Mystic. The flow of this piece is simply divine and certainly hope that all of fanstory reviews this piece.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much, Steve. I truly appreciate your wonderfully uplifting encouragement. Thank you for your time and always valued feedback.

reply by Neonewman on 12-Aug-2016

My pleasure Mystic!

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

I REMEMBERED THIS FROM WHEN I WAS GROWIN UP AND THE CHILDREN RECEIVED TO SECRETS PEOPLE WERE IN DISBELIEF AND STILL TODAY THERE IS SUPPOSED TO BE ONE MORE SECRET LEFT TO TELL A SECRET OF ALL SECRETS SO I AM TOLD

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much. There were three secrets which included some prophecy and so far all have come true. Lucia was the survivor who passed a few years back, but everything was written well before her death. One of the prophecies was that is man did not stop offending God a second and even more bloody war would occur - we would know WWII was about to start when a strange and unexplained light appeared in the sky which did happen the same year that the war began. I truly appreciate your time and feedback.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This incident was amazing and has always been one of my favorite stories of miracles. I love it when God entrusts children with his work. Your rhyming in this poetry story is fine work and enhances the narrative.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much. I think He picks children since they tend to be less jaded than we grown-ups. I truly appreciate your lovely words of encouragement and support.

reply by seaglass on 12-Aug-2016

Out of the mouth of babes

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written informative and interesting poem. There is only one who can do miracles like this. There is some things only God will fight for us when we belief. Congratulations on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much, Sandra. I am so happy you enjoyed this and most appreciative of your kind and encouraging feedback.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is a very nice poem about a story I was very fond of growing up. I even got to visit Fatima in my twenties . Have you been there?
Perfect rhyme, BTW.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much. No, I have not been, but have a friend that goes each year to offer the prayers of a group of us for the redemption of all mankind and lasting peace within the world.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I never heard of this miraculous event, Monica, but it sounds wonderful - just a shame it couldn't be repeated over and over until the miracles were believed by all who weren't present and dispel the cynicism ('some came to jeer'), and of course for the benefit of many more.

Excellent poem AND notes. I hope the anniversary is spectacular and successful.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016

Thank you, Ray. Since all of the other predictions made during the six appearances between May and October came to pass, I would have to say I am not so very much concerned for me as for the rest of the world. I am pretty sure when the final prophecy occurs it will be quite spectacular. I am truly grateful for your time and always kind and generous feedback.

Comment from jaybird1

Exceptional

A poem with great ethereal beauty.It is clothed in reverence.The rhyme flow and cadence
is near perfection.This is as good as it gets with exceptional quality

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Again, I thank you most sincerely for your kind and generous encouragement.

Comment from rockinm76233

Excellent

Enjoyed the historical story that you presented so well in beautiful words. Yes, it would be wonderful if peace could come for mankind, but that is not likely because we just can't seem to get our act together. Unfortunately. But thank God, he knows us, and knows our hearts. Keep praying, I join you there.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much. If we all keep praying, maybe one day peace will win out.

reply by rockinm76233 on 12-Aug-2016

your welcome

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

Well, I would expect no less from an angel, especially a poet one and more-so, You. This is a ten, not a six. Simply outstanding work and in my book The Winner. I will have to check out the movie. Take care. You are an angel. Bruce.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Again, I thank you with all my heart for your wonderfully uplifting words of encouragement and support.