Comment from Stephendick24

Good

I enjoyed reading your entry. You made made me laugh as I envisioned the scene. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Three hundred words is awfully short, but you did well with it.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you. I appreciate your kind review.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nice, good job on the enjoyment of eating, M&M my favorite, I was involved in a food fight once, didn't turn out well for anyone. good luck on this and enjoy your day.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you, William. Glad to know I'm not the only one who gets involved in things like this.

Comment from light

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this clever entry to the contest of enjoyment of eating. The M&M war is a fun read. I wish you success in the contest.
Elaine

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you. We had a great time that night.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your little story. Did it really happen?
I had never thought of using candy as ammo but I've seen similar fights with bread pieces at weddings.
Good luck at the competition!

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you. Yes, it really happened. My sister-in-law is a real character.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

The only change I see, and it's scarcely worth mentioning, is that I would put thoughts in italics, rather than quotes. A well-written flash, right to the prompt.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you. I will think on your suggestion. I'm not sure which is correct.